Fic: A Deal Is A Deal (Torchwood Jack/Ianto NC17 Time Verse)

May 12, 2011 09:02

Title: A Deal Is A Deal
Author: magikalrhiannon
Beta: kajmere, trueblue55 and soul1essharpy
Fandom: Torchwood AU
Verse: Time Verse
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Rating: NC17
Spoilers: All up to Season 2 Ep 11 Adrift
Summary: Jack made a deal with Ianto... the day Ianto told him about Havaasana, he would tell Ianto what caused the blood on his diaries. A deal is a deal.
Word Count: 7468
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kajmere May 12 2011, 00:43:15 UTC
this is really great bb.
we got to see first hand what happened to Jack when Ianto was taken by the rift, never did I imagine we'd get a look at what happened to Ianto all those years.

I am so happy you continue to expand on this verse. even if it does make you grumpy and want to pull your hair out LOL *smishes*

couldn't of asked for anything more in the end. Jack is truly a romantic at heart ♥

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magikalrhiannon May 12 2011, 00:58:06 UTC
Thank you for continually putting up with my whining and re-edits and constant encouragment in the face of my "ugh tell me its not crap?" mentality. I honestly don't know what I would do without you. After all, this entire verse wouldn't exist if not for you!

But don't worry, this isn't the end. I'm open to other suggestions and developments, even other characters that people want to see from the verse, not just our favourite dashing heroes. :)
*smishes you back*

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kajmere May 13 2011, 16:44:35 UTC
your writing will never be crap ♥

I would still love to hear this story unravel:

. "I set Cupid on his ass. Those cherubs just love Captain Fuckface."

"I have a feeling that's a long and involved story for another time,"

"Yeah. It's a good story though."

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remuslives23 May 12 2011, 01:48:11 UTC
Oh, that was fantastic! It was gutting to read what happened to Ianto and how badly Jack coped with losing him, but the ending... *clutches heart*

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magikalrhiannon May 12 2011, 02:15:36 UTC
*hugs* oh I'm so glad you liked it it! Like I said in the previous post, I was so nervous about it because it was a differnt format by doing it in a journal entry but I didn't want to make it too dialogue heavy and a dream sequence wouldn't explain it to Jack...

Anyway I'm happy it worked!

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bluelilacs May 12 2011, 02:57:56 UTC
I think the new format worked perfectly. Going back and using Ianto's diary was a stroke of pure genius! The way you were able to describe everything Ianto went through, felt and thought made it feel as if you were there, with him. It made Ianto's horrible ordeal gut-wrenchingly real. You could feel how terrifying it all was.

Poor Jack, so wracked with guilt over what Ianto was put through, not having been able to find him sooner to rescue him. At least he knew from the diary that Ianto had kept the faith that Jack was looking for him. Feeling so guilty about what he was driven to, to survive the long lonely years searching for Ianto.

And now it's all out, and now comes the healing.

Fantastic!

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magikalrhiannon May 12 2011, 03:53:16 UTC
Thank you so much. That's exactly what I was going for! I'm so happy you liked it!

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comicinks May 12 2011, 07:47:08 UTC
That was really sad and really sweet and awwwww. More please. Immediately. K thanks :)

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magikalrhiannon May 12 2011, 08:54:27 UTC
thank you darling. I'll try!

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lilferret May 13 2011, 13:55:31 UTC
You are so damned talented, you know that? You can make me laugh and cry in a matter of minutes. This fic is so damned amazing.

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magikalrhiannon May 13 2011, 14:04:18 UTC
Thank you wifey. That was exactly the pick-me-up I needed. *hugs*

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