Comments | magikcat112: Rare Pair Entry: "Detention" (Theodore/Daphne, 1/13)

magikcat112

Rare Pair Entry: "Detention" (Theodore/Daphne, 1/13)

Mar 03, 2009 21:42

Title: Detention
Pairing: Theodore Nott & Daphne Greengrass
Prompt: the question is obvious
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1800-ish (Sorry!)
Summary: Theodore hated it when someone interrupted his potion-making . . .
Author's Notes: The first story for the rarepair_shorts
Link to Prompt Table: here

( Story Under Cut... )

Comments 6

shiiki March 4 2009, 12:50:02 UTC

Ooh, so this is the beginning of the tutoring which you hinted at in Patronus Wizards, I presume? :)

You're off to a great start with this - I like the love-hate theme you've gone for, within Slytherin no less! Your characterisation of Theodore is new and fresh and I do like learning more about him.

magikcat112 March 4 2009, 16:17:44 UTC

Ooh, so this is the beginning of the tutoring which you hinted at in Patronus Wizards, I presume?

It could be, but it wasn't intentional.

I'm glad you enjoyed this. Part of the reason I didn't like shortening it was because I wasn't sure the personalities I wanted them to have could shine through properly even in a ficlet.

Thanks for reading!

mollywheezy March 4 2009, 14:10:44 UTC

I love your characterization of Theodore, especially the details of the potions ingredients and his "just-in-case" collection. I think Theodore would do very well on "Let's Make a Deal". ;) You have a gift for taking flat canon characters and making them real and interesting. Great job! :)

magikcat112 March 4 2009, 16:20:26 UTC

Aww, thanks! The potion ingredients were tough to find, so I'm glad you took notice of them ;). Theodore's collective habits will be seen again. I'm glad you think Theodore is interesting -- I'm enjoying writing him SOOO much.

lanyta March 5 2009, 13:37:00 UTC

As always, another beautiful fanfiction! =O)

I really love the way that you can write characters that aren´t so important in the books and give them such a strong personality. I liked too the way that they started to know each other more, with some questions that they didn´t want to answer!

I can´t wait for the others!

magikcat112 March 5 2009, 15:05:39 UTC

Well, right now Theodore Nott is the strongest personality, just because I've been writing him long before his shot in "Patronus Wizards." I hope that I can do the same with some of the other stories I have planned out.

Thanks for reading!