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Mission No. 4 Entry

Jun 07, 2007 21:29

Title: What Might Have Been
Author: freaky_zero
Rating: PG
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Pairing: EdxRoy, EdxWinry-ish
Notes: Entitled and inspired by the song What Might Have Been by Lonestar. Some spoilers for the end of the series/the movie.
Word Count: Approx. 1,000
Summary: Edward gets married.

( If anything, he’d expected this of Al. )

mission no. 4

Comments 13

ai_08 June 12 2007, 02:05:05 UTC

wow. this is really depressing but well executed. my heart just broke about five times while reading this ;_;

freaky_zero June 14 2007, 06:39:16 UTC

D= Oh, dear. I didn't mean for this to break any hearts! But if it happened 5 times, I must've done something right. =3 Thanks for reading.

lisody June 12 2007, 10:01:43 UTC

Oh, teh angst. Can totally see this... But really, it's heartbreaking ;__;

freaky_zero June 14 2007, 06:45:50 UTC

It is rather angsty, isn't it? I didn't mean for it to be...it just kind of happened!

Thanks for reading~ =)

secretfreaky June 12 2007, 12:34:04 UTC

So very sad! Wonderfully written, but the foreshadowing of misery ahead makes me so very upset...More?

freaky_zero June 14 2007, 06:49:33 UTC

Thanks! The foreshadowing was one of those inspirations that hits in the middle of the night and you have to get up and write down or you'll forget it...

More of this fic? Or more writing in general? I might get something else out of this, actually...

secretfreaky June 14 2007, 11:52:50 UTC

More of this fic and more writing in general would be fantastic!

hikaru_9 June 12 2007, 12:39:11 UTC

That last paragraph got me teary. Very well done.

freaky_zero June 14 2007, 09:15:04 UTC

*hands tissue* Thanks! =3

lynx212 June 12 2007, 19:25:59 UTC

I am such an angst junkie I loved it! :o)

Well written

freaky_zero June 14 2007, 09:15:52 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it~ ♥