looking for critique

[magpie01]

hey all. i just wrote this for the booklet that j wallace is putting together for york. he asked for stories about queer life at york, but i wrote this instead. what do you think? (also, if you find grammar problems, tell me please, so i can correct it before it gets published

Comments

[margox]

i loved this. all of this. i thought it was eloquent and very very empowering not just for those in the queer community, for people in general who struggle to identify who they are.

congrats. this brought a smile to this little idealists face.