Comments | magrutles: Cold Vengance Part 2 of 5

magrutles

Cold Vengance Part 2 of 5

Sep 27, 2012 21:27

Part two! this part really shows of MieAga's work. Honestly, this part disturbs me a little. I even forget that Dorian has this sadistic side to him sometimes. I hope Thomas never finds out!! (foreshadow ( Read more... )

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mieaga September 28 2012, 03:41:44 UTC

LOL! Suck my glock!...That one is going to stay with me!XD

magrutles September 28 2012, 14:05:56 UTC

Yeah, that was very clearly what he said. What did you think of the lens flare in the last photo? The "Bang" by itself was too cartoony IMHO so that was how I tried to make it feel more real, like you can see the gun go off. Did it work?

mieaga September 29 2012, 18:08:27 UTC

I think so. It was a great element choice and kept the manga/comic book feel.

vampireanneke September 28 2012, 04:48:44 UTC

Wow... ofcourse putting this on DOA would require a warning for adult content/language. But it's done really good.

magrutles September 28 2012, 14:09:48 UTC

Oh yeah, I actually questioned whether it would even be allowed on DoA. this story might actually be better on ConDoll. Part five has an even creepier vibe. but there's a reason we have to go here, I promise to get back to the romance soon! :)

mieaga September 29 2012, 18:56:53 UTC

Well it doesn't really show the violence per say...this might be OK. There is one part of this story that WILL be ConDoll only because you see the violence.

Actually though, ConDoll might be a great place to put this too!

magrutles September 30 2012, 15:19:31 UTC

Yeah I think most of my stories are DoA friendly, if I decide to post. But part 2 & 5 of this one are probably pushing it. Anyway, I'll have part 3 up today...maybe part 4 too. I got the pics prepped already so I just need to do dialogue.