Comments | magser: Someone Else's Life

magser

Someone Else's Life

Apr 02, 2009 21:03

Jared kept himself busy cleaning the already spotless bar. He was so tense now his head hurt. Jesus what did he want to talk about? He didn’t want to talk; he wanted to forget he had even set eyes on him. Forget he had touched him, kissed him. Forget that it felt so damn good. Chad was out there somewhere alone and Jared was here feeling things he ( Read more... )

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magser April 2 2009, 20:34:08 UTC

Thank you!!

pippii April 2 2009, 20:33:39 UTC

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
This was such a sweet chapter with the boys making up and KISSING♥♥
It made me all happy how Jensen understand were Jared is coming from and don`t push him.

And then the uncle have to come ruin it right???

♥hugs♥

magser April 2 2009, 20:34:34 UTC

Hheheheheeh you know me, I cant have smooth sailing all the time!

babycin April 2 2009, 20:57:43 UTC

Oh dear.. this chapter is so full of love and sweet and hot at the same time *is in love*

I can only thank you for this.. ♥

magser April 5 2009, 11:48:27 UTC

Aww thank you babe...

kes1807 April 2 2009, 21:04:47 UTC

Love this, at last they are talking and realising they both like each other and both want it:D But now I'm worried about the uncle *bites nails*

Can't wait for more:D

*hugs*

magser April 5 2009, 11:48:55 UTC

Uncle is bad....

lary_sam April 2 2009, 21:12:30 UTC

Oww man. It was a fantastic chapter.

I'm in loving with this story. Poor Jared...
Jensen will have to work hard to make Jared believe he can love and be loved.

What I most like is even after all that happened to him Jared is still a beautiful person.

Wait for more.

magser April 5 2009, 11:49:23 UTC

Thank you so much!I am so pleased you like it!