The Transformation of Ducklings 5/? (HP)

[magstopia]

TITLE: The Transformation of Ducklings 5/?
RATING: PG-13
SUMMARY: Rose Weasley-Granger and Scorpius Malfoy aren't about to let decades of enmity between their fathers get in the way of their friendship. As two shy, awkward teenagers wrestling with the onset of first love, they've got enough obstacles to overcome.
NOTE: Have I mentioned lately how

Comments

[jheanne]

Another great chapter. I liked how Scorpius fantasized about his date and how he had everything perfectly planned. Unfortunately, life doesn't turn out that well. I don't usually care for Draco but I'm curious about the dynamics in his family and I like how Draco and Scorpius talked at the end.

[author_by_night]

Oh, Draco, that prat.

I liked the part with the girls liking Scorpious for his "dark appeal." Very interesting commentary on how girls DO tend to get caught up in the idea of something that's actually a bad idea to get caught up in.

[1voice]

Thank you so much for the update! I am really enjoying this fic, and can't wait until the next installment!

I can completely understand your work load, good luck with that and try your best to enjoy the holiday season!

[arasnaem]

*sigh* Oh Mags, every chapter gets better, and better!

I was so wrapped up in Scorpius' fantasy that I almost forgot it was just in his head--until, of course, the owl arrived, and ruined it all!

Rose's letter (and all the PS's) was absolutely priceless.

Also, I appreciate the look into the Malfoy family. The conversation between father and son was very well done, and I appreciate the fact that Draco has taken time to think about this not just from his own point of view, but also, it seems, from his son's. He does make a very good point at the end, one I'm sure Scorpius will consider.

Brava, Mags, brava!

Christmas?! *wibbles* I guess I'll make it. I'd offer to beta, but really, I don't have the skillz. I'd just be doing it so I could read all the chapters first. LOL!

[shortysc22]

Oh wow, I love this chapter! Amazing job on it and I don't mind the fast updates at all. ^_^