Indulgence (HP)

[magstopia]

TITLE: Indulgence
RATING: PG-13
SUMMARY: A girl, a boy, and an enchanted boat.
NOTES: This is a PWP in the Plot? What Plot? sense of the acronym, set near the end of Ginny's 7th year at Hogwarts. I felt like writing a scene that emphasized description and mood more than anything else. I also had a craving to write Harry/Ginny, though this shouldn'

Comments

[miss_daizy]

Wonderful, wonderful. Love the description of Ginny's leg and the water dripping down; nicely sensually with a beautiful use of language.

[magglenagall]

Thank you! That image of Ginny's leg draped over the edge of the boat was the first thing that came to mind; the rest just fell into place. The added detail about the water dripping off seemed like it belonged there. I'm really glad you liked this. Thanks for reviewing!

[tunxeh]

Very nice. Idyllic, even.

[magglenagall]

Thanks! Everyone should be able to have a day like this every now and then. Even with the giant squid trying to horn in. *g*

[princessfics]

This is really pretty. I enjoyed it a lot. You definitely succeeded with your attempt to emphasize description and mood. Thanks for sharing. :)

[magglenagall]

Thank you for commenting! I love creating word-pictures, so I'm glad you enjoyed this.

[katieay]

Argh, Mags! This is languid and hot, just as the warm summer's day you've so breathtakingly depicted. I do love your use of description, and I felt in the first passage, as if the boat was lulling me.

I love that you wrote this snipped. I vote for more itches ;o) As the time allows, of course! The ending is so sexy, they're so comfortable with each other, it's just lovely.

[magglenagall]

Argh, Katie! I am so desperate for sun and warmth you can't imagine. Alas, until we move, I have to make do with my imagination.

*loves*

[siriusrocks18]

oh, this is sweet :) i love how quiet it is, how content they are. especially after all that's happened. sigh.

i really really hope you write some more :D :D :D we've missed you! thanks for sharing this with us!

[magglenagall]

You're too kind. :-) I'll certainly leave the door open for more bits and bobs like this. I'm glad you enjoyed it - thanks for reading and commenting!