Three ficlets (1 Vorkosigan saga, 2 ST:XI)

Dec 24, 2009 08:59

Responses to prompts from my f-list. There's some implied sexuality in the first 2, but none of them are particularly explicit.

DISCLAIMER: Lois McMaster Bujold and Paramount own their respective 'verses and everything they encompass. These are works of fan fiction, and thus derive no profit or material benefit therefrom.

Vorkosigan saga: Ivan, Alys/Simon, during Memory )

gaila, vorkosigan, kirk, trek gen, st:xi, mccoy, alys/simon, sulu, ivan

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jheanne December 24 2009, 18:04:29 UTC
I love them! I'll write a proper review when I'm not on my bb.

Oh, I loved this. Sulu's so apologetic and Kirk is just an adorable wise a**. After watching the movie a dozen times last weekend, I can completely imagine the dialogue you created for these three characters, especially Bones. More plz? ;)

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magglenagall December 27 2009, 22:24:12 UTC
Awesome! I'm glad you thought I got their voices right, especially Bones'. I don't have time to do another ficlet yet, but I do have a Reboot WIP that is very Bones-centric - in fact, the chapter I was working on when NaNo began was entirely in his POV. I'll let you know when it's ready for posting (the 1st chapter is on FF.net, but it's in Uhura's POV).

Thanks for the awesome prompt. :-)

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kit_the_brave December 26 2009, 04:20:28 UTC
It's brilliant! I was totally not expecting the thumb. (Neither was Bones, as it happened.) And I love the ending. Poor Sulu, trying to apologize, and Kirk giving the signature line!

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

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magglenagall December 27 2009, 22:25:40 UTC
Yay! The thumb was an out-of-the-blue inspiration - I can see Kirk not thinking it's a big deal, because he's got Bones to patch him up. I'm glad you liked this. Thanks for the awesome prompt that fit so well with jheanne's request!

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arasnaem December 29 2009, 02:57:34 UTC
poor, poor Ivan!

I guess that's why you should always knock, eh? ;)

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magglenagall January 2 2010, 23:36:00 UTC
Poor Ivan probably never had to worry about what he might see if he barged into his mother's bedroom before. :-)

(I still need to write that kitten fic. I've got the idea, I just need to give it some water, sunlight and fertilizer.)

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flyingcarpet December 31 2009, 04:32:13 UTC
I don't know Bujold's work, so I stuck with the Trek ficlets, and I love both of them! Kirk and Sulu are totally in character in the last one, and McCoy has just the right amount of bluster and care. And the one with Gaila was great -- kind of sad, kind of frustratingly true, and a little bit sexy, too. :) I'd love to see you write Gaila in a longer piece.

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magglenagall January 2 2010, 23:38:21 UTC
Thank you! McCoy is such great fun to write, especially when Kirk is giving him a hard time.

As for Gaila - someday, maybe, but don't hold your breath. She's such a creature of fanon - I'm in love with rheanna27's take on her in "Lunch and Other Obscenities," for example - that I'm not sure I could do her justice without seeming imitative. But never say never, as I always say. :-P

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philomytha January 11 2010, 18:05:25 UTC
(found via surfing bujold_fic's flist)
That first one is delightful. How I love Alys! Her self-possession is exactly that absolute, I am sure, though I expect Illyan was less than thrilled by the interruption. One of these days Ivan is going to learn to knock.

I hope you do write more Vorkosigan fic this year.

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magglenagall January 14 2010, 15:04:54 UTC
I'm guilty of surfing bujold_fic's f-list in search of fic myself. :-) I'm glad you found this, and glad you enjoyed it, as I'm a big fan of your Simon/Alys fics. Thanks for commenting!

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