Transparency (Castle)

[magstopia]

TITLE: Transparency
RATING: PG-13
WORD COUNT: ~500
SUMMARY: A wedding reception, a glass elevator, and an audience of three.

DISCLAIMER: ABC Studios owns Castle and everything it encompasses. This is a work of fan fiction, and thus derives no profit or material benefit therefrom.

Comments

[magglenagall]

Elevators seem to be a common theme lately - I had to be careful mine didn't stray too close to fics I'd read while it was taking shape in my head.

I'm glad you liked this, and especially that one line - it was the result of a late edit. Thanks for your comment(s)!

[sunshine_minx]

This is hilarious! I love how it opens, just...observing. Cracking jokes. It's great.

[magglenagall]

Thanks so much! I love the interactions between all the members of the ensemble, and wanted to try my hand at trying to capture their voices. I'm glad you enjoyed this!

[foreverwriting9]

Ahahaha...

"'Kissing' seems so inadequate for what they're doing."

"Upstaged at your own wedding, man."

He shrugged. "I'm not complaining."

I can totally see them saying this.

[magglenagall]

Hee, thank you!

[megger_69]

Great story :)

[bloodwrites]

Great fic - I could see the whole thing as it played out, and you did a great job capturing the voices! So fun!

[magglenagall]

Thank you so much! Getting the voices right is so important to me, and one of the great challenges of writing fic, so I'm glad you think I succeeded. :-)

[magglenagall]

Thanks!

[yen35]

Very interesting and funny! I wish something like this happens in the show! (probably not I know, but a girl can dream!)

[magglenagall]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked this. Me, I'll be content with a kiss they can't pretend didn't happen or write off as an undercover op. :-)