Comments | mahaliem: The Ox Show Incident, Fandom - Frasier, Pairing - Frasier/Niles, Prompt

mahaliem

The Ox Show Incident, Fandom - Frasier, Pairing - Frasier/Niles, Prompt - Competition

Feb 03, 2011 14:11

Recently, I posted a short story on the dreamwidth Porn Battle site. You can read it here or below the cut. I am rather absurdly pleased with this story as I worked hard to get the voices to sound right ( Read more... )

porn-battle fic

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sdwolfpup February 3 2011, 22:35:29 UTC

I was honestly pretty skeptical but I trusted your writing and, wow, this was great. So funny! And some of the lines I could just HEAR them saying.

mahaliem February 3 2011, 22:43:53 UTC

Thank you so very much! And I'm so flattered that you trusted my writing enough to read it as the entire idea of Frasier and porn can be rather off-putting. Thank you again!

oxoniensis February 4 2011, 00:19:22 UTC

This just makes me giggle so much! It's just perfect for them!

mahaliem February 4 2011, 02:11:06 UTC

Thank you! And thank you again for all of your help. Your suggestions really improved it immensely.

"Oh, my!" Daphne cried. "Drs. Crane! And little Drs. Crane!" roxymissrose February 4 2011, 01:04:10 UTC

I was so excited to see it was Frazier--I rarely see Frazier fic, so I jumped on this.

OMG! I cried from laughing and that's not an exaggeration, I'm still laughing as I type this. When Martin and Daphne walked in, I almost wet myself! And Twiggy's younger thinner sister, lord, that was too good! You got their voices and their attitudes absolutely spot-on perfect!

HUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUG! Thank you a million times for making me laugh so hard!!

Re: "Oh, my!" Daphne cried. "Drs. Crane! And little Drs. Crane!" mahaliem February 4 2011, 02:12:48 UTC

Yay! I'm so very delighted that you liked it. I'm especially thrilled that you thought the voices and attitudes were accurate. Thank you!!!

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mahaliem February 4 2011, 02:14:51 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm so very glad you gave it a chance and enjoyed it.

Oooh, fun kestrelsparhawk February 4 2011, 01:28:44 UTC

I was mostly giggling and when Niles said something laughing aloud through the whole thing. How hysterical. Particularly like Niles imitating Lilith's bedroom comment. I do think those boys belong together!

Re: Oooh, fun mahaliem February 4 2011, 02:19:30 UTC

Niles and Frasier never failed to make me laugh, so I really wanted to do them justice. Thank you so very, very much.