Comments | maidenjedi: FIC: Keep Me Here (The X-Files, 1/1)

maidenjedi

FIC: Keep Me Here (The X-Files, 1/1)

Apr 07, 2011 17:05

TITLE: Keep Me Here ( Read more... )

fanfic: the x-files

Comments 4

mosinging1986 April 8 2011, 04:08:51 UTC

I always found Diana (as well as her backstory with Mulder) so intriguing!

How I miss Obsessive!Mulder!

maidenjedi April 8 2011, 16:51:55 UTC

Me too. :-) Thanks for reading!

erries April 8 2011, 15:43:34 UTC

I enjoyed this. :) One nitpicky thing: You've got some issues near the end with where they're physically located. They sit down on the couch, then they're suddenly standing in the kitchen, then they're back on the couch reaching over to the coffee table. Other than that, it was great.

maidenjedi April 8 2011, 16:51:09 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for picking up on that - if I ever revise and expand this like I want to, I'm going to ask you to beta. You have such a good idea for this stuff! :-)