Great story, and I join the chorus looking forward to the next part in December.
I love how the questions directed at the AI reflected each character so clearly. Clark was passive, trusting in Lex, Martha was concerned about the justice of the AI's actions, Jonathan of course by the implications of the word consort and Lex... He was interested in EVERYTHING! If ever a person was meant to have access to an advanced AI, it's him.
Takes a bow Thanks for your wonderful commenting. I'm absolutely thrilled that you enjoyed it.
Can you imagine Lex with access to the AI? Martha will be putting limits on him really early on. The AI's prime objective is to protect Kal El. Keeping him happy is a side benefit and if it means doing whatever Lex asks, then it will. Oh yeah, Martha intervenes - very quickly.
My beta wants to read the end of this story and she has been merciless in her prodding.
This story is wonderful. I always love stories which explore the what if and this is really getting off to a fantastic start. I'm looking forward to you continuing this.
Seriously, thanks so much for your lovely comment. I like exploring the what if. I believe that tiny actions make such a difference to a life. There is more story to come. And yes, my beta is sharpening her claws...ahem, pen, in preparation.
Wow this was just wonderful. I'm glad lex managed to get to the safety of the kent's with a plan in mind. Your Lex is amazing. Clark is so sweet and adorable. And Martha and Jon will take care of anyone who is a threat to their family.
I can't wait for December. This was a totally WONDERFUL read!!
I'm so thrilled you enjoyed the story. And now that you've read it, I hope you understood my 'jumping up and down' in excitement when the cover took shape. And, btw, THANKS so very, very much.
I'm really enjoying this story!! And am thankful that there's a Part Two in the pipeline. Consider yourself lucky. I'm not above nagging, if need be. Heh.
I love the idea of Yex building an underground lair. Heh heh heh.
You did a wonderful job of blending canon with this AU. Heck, I would have rather seen this on tv. Lovely details and great dialogue!
I'm so overjoyed you loved the story. Your opinion means a lot to me. I'm not above nagging, if need be. Heh Hmm, as long as you realize that I will be doing the same for your 'Black Dress' verse.
I love the idea of Yex building an underground lair. Martha is going to poke a pin as he bubbles up with grandiose plans
Lovely details and great dialogue! Thanks my betas. They were ruthless and the end product was all the better for their torture.
There is more coming.
BTW, thanks for the box tops. I forgot to send a note when I received them. I'm so glad you remembered and yes, we take them in any condition.
Ooooooooooh, I love your icon. Thanks so much for commenting so positively. There is another story in this verse in the pipeline. Check back in just before Xmas.
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Great story, and I join the chorus looking forward to the next part in December.
I love how the questions directed at the AI reflected each character so clearly. Clark was passive, trusting in Lex, Martha was concerned about the justice of the AI's actions, Jonathan of course by the implications of the word consort and Lex... He was interested in EVERYTHING! If ever a person was meant to have access to an advanced AI, it's him.
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Thanks for your wonderful commenting. I'm absolutely thrilled that you enjoyed it.
Can you imagine Lex with access to the AI? Martha will be putting limits on him really early on. The AI's prime objective is to protect Kal El. Keeping him happy is a side benefit and if it means doing whatever Lex asks, then it will. Oh yeah, Martha intervenes - very quickly.
My beta wants to read the end of this story and she has been merciless in her prodding.
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Wow this was just wonderful. I'm glad lex managed to get to the safety of the kent's with a plan in mind. Your Lex is amazing. Clark is so sweet and adorable. And Martha and Jon will take care of anyone who is a threat to their family.
I can't wait for December. This was a totally WONDERFUL read!!
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And, btw, THANKS so very, very much.
I'll be sending you a private msg. later on.
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I love the idea of Yex building an underground lair. Heh heh heh.
You did a wonderful job of blending canon with this AU. Heck, I would have rather seen this on tv. Lovely details and great dialogue!
Can't wait to see where you're going with it!
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I love the idea of Yex building an underground lair. Martha is going to poke a pin as he bubbles up with grandiose plans
Lovely details and great dialogue! Thanks my betas. They were ruthless and the end product was all the better for their torture.
There is more coming.
BTW, thanks for the box tops. I forgot to send a note when I received them. I'm so glad you remembered and yes, we take them in any condition.
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Thanks for writing.
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