I can't even describe how Proud I am of you for doing this. On your own. Maio-pride overwhelms me. I just skimmed through this and It's not fair to comment yet but I wanted you to know I saw this the moment I opened LJ. But I'll be back later, it's Sunday here and we're going out in a bit, church service and a visit to my mom and sister.
From what i've read I can say , you've come a long way bb. Though English is not your first language and I know how Hard it is at times, you challenged yourself and pushed yourself, and you did it. I am so proud. I cannot say it enough eh?
I just read it in full now. Don't think you're not "good enough" to do this. Because you have every right to put into words anything that moves you. And I know Edward moves you a lot and it shows by how you channeled his thoughts, his emotions. You immersed yourself in his world and gave him more "voice". Very moving. I don't want to point out the technical part of the writing because i know you struggled with this. But I see improvements and that's the best thing about it. The reason why I'm proud, apart from the fact that you did this on your own.
Thank you to read "my Edward"! It has not been easy to write this, but the most difficult has been doing it alone. Anyway I always feel you beside me and that makes me stronger and bold enough *lol*
If you don't mind I would like to know the wrong things of the techinal part, cos I really would like to improve as much as possible, cos even I read a little in English and I speak to all of you, I don't use English that much to know how to write...So, please held me there, so next time I will try to do it better, Y/Y?
Maio! bb... that was great! You know, I always like to read EPOV, it's refreshing and interesting to know what he was thinking on the most important moments of the saga!
*what have I done?*
er... you wrote a beautiful story, bb! You know I'll always be there to help you, but it's good for you to start trying, you'll get more experience, lol
Thank you sweetie, I have really missed you while I was doing this, sometimes I was tented to send it to you, but finally I've done it. It has been really HARD with such a LONG story, lol
hi :) you're so good! you know english is not my language either, but I think you're really good! And I love Edward POV too, so... I love your stories :) I'd like to write something in english too... sometime, maybe. kisses :)
Oh my god!!! It's so beautiful, once I started to read it, I just couldn't stop. It look just like the way Edward was narrating in Midnight Sun. You did a Perfect great job. I felt like I was reading a Stepehenie's novel!! Please, now I'm an addiited, you have to do more!!! Your version of Edward POV is so good. You have to do it for Eclipse and Breaking Dawn. I couldn't notice that you aren't english. Your english is perfect!!!
Yeah, I'm reading them, I didn't finished them yet. I just red the last one quickly to send you a comment about it. But I'm already in love with your version of EPOV!! Totally flawless.
I can't wait so read other project that you talked about. Are you working on Eclipse or BD ?? That would be awesome it you do it like for New Moon, only the key parts between Edward and Bella. Now I'm gonna shut up, you're free to write whatever you want. I'll just be happy to read it.
Thank's a lot for adding me. It makes me happy when people like to follow me and see my manips ;)
You're welcome!! Your work it's awesome and someday maybe I will ask you for some manip to post it with some work, YAY?
I'm still working at NM with the next chapter, but I'm too slow and don't have as much time as I like to do it, so I don't know how many time it's going to take me :(
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From what i've read I can say , you've come a long way bb. Though English is not your first language and I know how Hard it is at times, you challenged yourself and pushed yourself, and you did it. I am so proud. I cannot say it enough eh?
ILY! muchos besitos &hearts
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Yes, it's have been HARD, specially without Bell, I think I've delaying this cos I was 'flying alone' this time.
I'll wait....
ILY2! Muchos besitos &hearts
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thank you for continuing this! &hearts
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If you don't mind I would like to know the wrong things of the techinal part, cos I really would like to improve as much as possible, cos even I read a little in English and I speak to all of you, I don't use English that much to know how to write...So, please held me there, so next time I will try to do it better, Y/Y?
gracias y besitos
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*what have I done?*
er... you wrote a beautiful story, bb! You know I'll always be there to help you, but it's good for you to start trying, you'll get more experience, lol
I'm so proud of you, bb... I love it!
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I love you like "my Edward"
Gracias!! Besitos
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you're so good! you know english is not my language either, but I think you're really good!
And I love Edward POV too, so... I love your stories :)
I'd like to write something in english too... sometime, maybe.
kisses :)
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I'm going to post soon, probably on Saturday a new version with some help from Robyn as my beta...
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Please, now I'm an addiited, you have to do more!!! Your version of Edward POV is so good. You have to do it for Eclipse and Breaking Dawn.
I couldn't notice that you aren't english. Your english is perfect!!!
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Oh, MIdnight Sun. I'd really like that see finish that novel. Me, just coping. she's so good, but, thank you!!!
And thanks for droping by, I love your work too!
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I can't wait so read other project that you talked about. Are you working on Eclipse or BD ?? That would be awesome it you do it like for New Moon, only the key parts between Edward and Bella.
Now I'm gonna shut up, you're free to write whatever you want. I'll just be happy to read it.
Thank's a lot for adding me. It makes me happy when people like to follow me and see my manips ;)
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I'm still working at NM with the next chapter, but I'm too slow and don't have as much time as I like to do it, so I don't know how many time it's going to take me :(
See you around!! ♥
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Great job!
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