oh, lol, at the event I went to a while back, if you talked with the editors for Square-Enix magazines (GanGan, G-Fantasy, etc), they'd give you free manuscript paper and free drafting paper. That's all it is, haha.
:< I wanna do nanomango too. I can't think of what to draw and wrap up in 30 pages though....
It's cool seeing your sketches! They're really detailed and planned out. The story sounds cute too! Ugh, you're inspirng me to try now! Do you write a script before you get to drawing? That has got to be one of my biggest hurdles. Starting. And deciding how to start. Oh, and writing all the stuff I'm supposed to draw. Then there's the whole... having enough energy/inspiration to start doing either one of those things...
*feels the circular walls of fail close in on her*
Wow, it looks so good so far!! And the characters are really cute. XD
Maybe for the seventh page, you could make it a bit clearer that Sayaka is kind of playing along with what she thinks is just a cosplayer who's really into it? Because otherwise I wouldn't imagine she'd go right from being shocked/frightened to saying oh shoot, I'm late for school! So maybe add in a line like, "I'd love to stay and act this out with you, but I don't even know what manga you're quoting, and besides I'm late for school!" Only, like, not as lame as that suggested sentence. XD
!! Actually, that's perfect. I thought the pacing was kinda off on that page--I can probably fit another panel in there. Yay!
And hahahaha you are awesome for reading my horrible Japanese handwriting. I totally realized I wrote "amari" instead of "amari nai" too! I'm great at the nihongoes.
Oh good! I'm really not familiar with how to make comics myself (and lol then we have my drawing abilities - or lack thereof), so I'm glad my suggestion was helpful!
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It's cute.
If I would say anything about changing it maybe I would change the 4th page?
the lower left hand corner seems kinda strange to me.
Ugh, I have everything scanned into my computer but I'm too lazy to upload and I think no one will comment anyway OTL
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I'll be joining this nanomango tomorrow, today will be me doing the roughs.
good luck!
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It's cool seeing your sketches! They're really detailed and planned out. The story sounds cute too! Ugh, you're inspirng me to try now! Do you write a script before you get to drawing? That has got to be one of my biggest hurdles. Starting. And deciding how to start. Oh, and writing all the stuff I'm supposed to draw. Then there's the whole... having enough energy/inspiration to start doing either one of those things...
*feels the circular walls of fail close in on her*
XD WELL! I'll be rooting for you! Keep at it!
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Maybe for the seventh page, you could make it a bit clearer that Sayaka is kind of playing along with what she thinks is just a cosplayer who's really into it? Because otherwise I wouldn't imagine she'd go right from being shocked/frightened to saying oh shoot, I'm late for school! So maybe add in a line like, "I'd love to stay and act this out with you, but I don't even know what manga you're quoting, and besides I'm late for school!" Only, like, not as lame as that suggested sentence. XD
But yeah! I'm excited to read more!!
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And hahahaha you are awesome for reading my horrible Japanese handwriting. I totally realized I wrote "amari" instead of "amari nai" too! I'm great at the nihongoes.
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My nihongoes are so rusty, oh man.
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