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Beautifully Wicked Part 4
Avatar: The Last Airbender is the creation of Michael Dante DeMartino and Bryan Konietzko and is used without permission.
"How does she taste?” Mai whispered.
Zuko answered by leaning to her and kissing her hard, his tongue fierce and demanding in her mouth. When they finished Mai chuckled. “Honey. I should have known.”
“Known what?” Ty Lee asked faintly. She was slowly becoming aware again, drifting out of the euphoric haze of her orgasm.
“That you'd taste like honey,” Mai answered with a teasing lilt. “It makes sense, considering how sickeningly sweet you are most of the time.” She gently reached between Ty Lee's legs. Ty Lee shivered, sighing softly. Mai brought her hand away and licked her fingertips. “Mmm... I think she's ready for you, Zuko.” Zuko nodded and slid off the bed. He undid his trousers, the light red silk pooling at his feet, and untied his loincloth, tossing it aside.
Ty Lee squealed, grinning happily. “Ooh, you weren't kidding, Mai. He is healthy!” To the delight of the two woman Zuko blushed a deep, rich red.
“I can't believe you're blushing,” laughed Mai.
“I can't believe you talk to Ty Lee about-” Zuko trailed off and gestured wildly, words failing him.
“I'd think most guys would be pleased that their girlfriend boasts that he's hung like a komodo-rhino.”
Zuko buried his face in his hands. “Please don't tell me you talk to the other girls about me like that.”
“Don't worry, love - I've only told Ty Lee, and now she knows first hand, so the point is moot.”
Ty Lee looked away, a trifle embarrassed. “I, uh... I've passed on a few things Mai has told me to Suki. It's only fair though - you should hear some of the things Sokka-”
“No, I don't need to hear!” Zuko cut her off sharply. The women laughed and, after blowing out a breath, Zuko joined them. “So, no one else?”
Mai shook her head. Ty Lee giggled. “Nope,” she said. “Katara is too much of a prude and Toph wouldn't know what to do with a cock.”
“Don't make fun of Toph,” said Zuko, suddenly serious, though his tone was mild. “She's a little afraid of this sort of thing.”
“Really?” said Mai, arching an eyebrow.
“Yeah. She told me at dinner, just before I excused myself, when I teased her about finding a boyfriend.”
“I didn't think Toph was afraid of anything,” said Ty Lee.
“Even the bravest have something they fear.” Mai nodded in agreement. Ty Lee looked thoughtful for a moment, then giggled. “Imagine if she learned what we three were up to right now. Her head would probably explode!”
“Worry about yourself, Ty Lee,” said Zuko, flashing a shark-like grin. “I plan on making the two of you explode, though in a different fashion.”
Mai yawned elaborately. “My, don't you boast. Why don't you come over here and prove it, Zuzu.”
“Yeah!” agreed Ty Lee. “Less talk, more action!”
“Oh, I'll give you some action,” Zuko growled, and pounced on Ty Lee. She shrieked happily, throwing her arms around him and kissing him. He kissed her back thoroughly, on the mouth, the cheeks, the throat, then shifted his body. She hissed sharply, closing her eyes tight at the feel of the tip of his manhood pressing against her intimate self. “Are you all right?” she heard him whisper in her ear.
“I'm much better than all right,” she whispered back. “Make love to me, Zuko.” He kissed her on the forehead, then on the lips, and when he was kissing her he took her in one slow, languid thrust. She moaned loudly, her head lolling on the mattress. She heard Zuko exhale, and was distinctly aware of Mai's sharp, excited breathing.
“Agni,” muttered Zuko. He took a moment to settle, for he had almost lost himself in that first moment. The feel of Ty Lee and his awareness of Mai's excitement nearly overwhelmed him. Licking his lips, he kissed Ty Lee again and started to move against her. Her moans started soft and low, growing louder and longer as they continued. Suddenly he knelt up and hooked her legs with his arms, carefully folded her in half beneath him, so her ankles were by the sides of her head.
Ty Lee let out a long, shuddering moan. Her eyes opened a little; smokey gray slits that glittered with lust and approval. “Yes,” she hissed. “I like that.” She shut her eyes and cried out as Zuko started again, thrusting deeper into her. He exhaled in time with his motions, his rhythm slow yet strong. He growled when he felt Mai touch him, her smooth palms running up and down his back, her mouth hot and wet at the nape of his neck. After one hard, very deep thrust he stopped, pulling out and kneeling back from Ty Lee, releasing her legs and letting her unfold. Mai's arms slipped around his torso, her hands pressing against his pectoral muscles as she kissed and licked his un-scarred ear.
Ty Lee let out a fluttering little sigh. “What's wrong Zuko? Am I too much for you?” she teased.
Zuko shook his head. “No,” he answered, voice hoarse and deep. Ty Lee opened her eyes and saw his face again had that predatory expression. Mai was wrapped around him, her chin resting on his shoulder as she looked down at her, her golden eyes blazing and her smile wicked. Ty Lee swallowed, squirming a little under the lustful regard of her two lovers.
“No,” repeated Zuko. “I just want to try something else now.” He grabbed Ty Lee by the hips, rolling her over and pulling up onto her hands and knees. She squeaked in surprise at how fast and effortlessly he had moved her, then cried out sharply when he took her from behind, filling her to the hilt, his hips grinding against her rear. She clutched and bit at the sheets, writhing as he made love to her in this fashion, his strong, calloused hands at her sides, holding her steady. It was almost too much... She became aware of Mai's laughter echoing in her ears. She turned her head and saw her friend lying on her side close to her, her white teeth bared in a smile somehow both beatific and sinful.
“How do you feel, Ty Lee?” Mai asked.
“Guh... good...” Ty Lee stuttered out. Mai nodded. She reached under her and cupped one of her swaying breasts, rubbing her palm against its erect, sensitive nipple.
“Zuko's everything I told you, isn't he?” said Mai. Ty Lee moaned loudly, just managing to nod. Mai took her nipple between thumb and forefinger, pinching it. “Is he fucking you good, my sweet?”
“Yes! Oh burning Agni, yes!” Mai let go of her breast, now grabbing her by her long braid and yanking her head up, kissing her savagely. Ty Lee screamed into Mai's mouth, her body quaking with an orgasm like a thunderclap.
Zuko watched his two lovers kiss through slitted eyes and felt his eroding control crumble to nothing. He thrust into Ty Lee one last time and climaxed, a burning, delirious rush of ecstasy that made him roar with his release. Mai let go of Ty Lee's braid, and she slumped down flat on her belly, spent and breathless. Zuko collapsed on top of her, having enough awareness to brace himself on his forearms so not to crush her with his weight. They stayed like that for a moment, savoring the almost painful sensation of skin touching sensitive skin, then Zuko dropped a kiss on Ty Lee's neck, another between her shoulders. He withdrew from her and sat back on his haunches and breathed deeply. Mai crawled over to him, embracing him, murmuring softly and kissing him with deep, languid satisfaction. “Agni,” muttered Zuko, resting his forehead against Mai's.
The three lovers were motionless for a time, before Ty Lee broke the silence with a pleased groan. She shrugged her shoulders, shook her head, then rolled over on her back, stretching and arching cat-like. She looked up at her two oldest friends, who were now kissing deeply again, and grinned. “Agni, the two of you are so fuckhot.”
Zuko snorted at this. “Fuckhot?”
“Yeah. It fits you both perfectly.”
“You have such a way with words, Ty Lee,” said Mai with a laugh. She threw herself down next to Ty Lee, catching the smaller girl in a hug and kissing her, Ty Lee murmured happily, returning both the kiss and the embrace.
Zuko groaned. “The two of you are going to kill me.”
“Uh uh,” said Mai. “No dying on us yet - at least not until I get my turn.”
“I love you too, Mai,” Zuko answered sardonically.
“Why don't you come here and show me how much you love me.”
“Give me a little time.”
“How much time?”
He grinned. “About a hundred years.”
All three laughed. “I'm afraid that's a bit too long to wait,” drawled Mai. “Thankfully I gave this a little forethought.” She crawled over Ty Lee, taking up the silver goblet from the nightstand and passing it to Zuko. “I procured us a restorative - it returns potency to men and energy to women. Take just a small swallow.” Zuko complied. The liquid tasted like spearmint, sharp and astringent, bubbling in his mouth and down his throat. “Unh,” he grunted, then handed the goblet to Ty Lee, who took her own sip and giggled. “It tickles,” she said. Mai set the restorative back on the nightstand and poured sweet water into the smaller golden cups and handed them out. They had a few pieces of fruit as well - Ty Lee some strawberries, Mai a handful of white grapes, Zuko a slice of pomegranate. They chatted and laughed while they ate and drank, and by the time they were finished Zuko could feel his blood rushing through him hot and swift again.
Mai eyed him hungrily. “I think you're ready, but let's make sure,” she said, voice husky. She came over to him, kissing him, their tongues playing against each other. She traced the starburst scar on his chest with a finger, sculpted the sharp lines of his abdomen. She began to kiss a trail down his chest. Zuko closed his eyes, letting his head fall back, exhaling deeply as his body tensed in eager anticipation.
Again, this is a raw draft, so please forgive any mistakes or errors.
Beautifully Wicked Part 4
Avatar: The Last Airbender is the creation of Michael Dante DeMartino and Bryan Konietzko and is used without permission.
"How does she taste?” Mai whispered.
Zuko answered by leaning to her and kissing her hard, his tongue fierce and demanding in her mouth. When they finished Mai chuckled. “Honey. I should have known.”
“Known what?” Ty Lee asked faintly. She was slowly becoming aware again, drifting out of the euphoric haze of her orgasm.
“That you'd taste like honey,” Mai answered with a teasing lilt. “It makes sense, considering how sickeningly sweet you are most of the time.” She gently reached between Ty Lee's legs. Ty Lee shivered, sighing softly. Mai brought her hand away and licked her fingertips. “Mmm... I think she's ready for you, Zuko.” Zuko nodded and slid off the bed. He undid his trousers, the light red silk pooling at his feet, and untied his loincloth, tossing it aside.
Ty Lee squealed, grinning happily. “Ooh, you weren't kidding, Mai. He is healthy!” To the delight of the two woman Zuko blushed a deep, rich red.
“I can't believe you're blushing,” laughed Mai.
“I can't believe you talk to Ty Lee about-” Zuko trailed off and gestured wildly, words failing him.
“I'd think most guys would be pleased that their girlfriend boasts that he's hung like a komodo-rhino.”
Zuko buried his face in his hands. “Please don't tell me you talk to the other girls about me like that.”
“Don't worry, love - I've only told Ty Lee, and now she knows first hand, so the point is moot.”
Ty Lee looked away, a trifle embarrassed. “I, uh... I've passed on a few things Mai has told me to Suki. It's only fair though - you should hear some of the things Sokka-”
“No, I don't need to hear!” Zuko cut her off sharply. The women laughed and, after blowing out a breath, Zuko joined them. “So, no one else?”
Mai shook her head. Ty Lee giggled. “Nope,” she said. “Katara is too much of a prude and Toph wouldn't know what to do with a cock.”
“Don't make fun of Toph,” said Zuko, suddenly serious, though his tone was mild. “She's a little afraid of this sort of thing.”
“Really?” said Mai, arching an eyebrow.
“Yeah. She told me at dinner, just before I excused myself, when I teased her about finding a boyfriend.”
“I didn't think Toph was afraid of anything,” said Ty Lee.
“Even the bravest have something they fear.” Mai nodded in agreement. Ty Lee looked thoughtful for a moment, then giggled. “Imagine if she learned what we three were up to right now. Her head would probably explode!”
“Worry about yourself, Ty Lee,” said Zuko, flashing a shark-like grin. “I plan on making the two of you explode, though in a different fashion.”
Mai yawned elaborately. “My, don't you boast. Why don't you come over here and prove it, Zuzu.”
“Yeah!” agreed Ty Lee. “Less talk, more action!”
“Oh, I'll give you some action,” Zuko growled, and pounced on Ty Lee. She shrieked happily, throwing her arms around him and kissing him. He kissed her back thoroughly, on the mouth, the cheeks, the throat, then shifted his body. She hissed sharply, closing her eyes tight at the feel of the tip of his manhood pressing against her intimate self. “Are you all right?” she heard him whisper in her ear.
“I'm much better than all right,” she whispered back. “Make love to me, Zuko.” He kissed her on the forehead, then on the lips, and when he was kissing her he took her in one slow, languid thrust. She moaned loudly, her head lolling on the mattress. She heard Zuko exhale, and was distinctly aware of Mai's sharp, excited breathing.
“Agni,” muttered Zuko. He took a moment to settle, for he had almost lost himself in that first moment. The feel of Ty Lee and his awareness of Mai's excitement nearly overwhelmed him. Licking his lips, he kissed Ty Lee again and started to move against her. Her moans started soft and low, growing louder and longer as they continued. Suddenly he knelt up and hooked her legs with his arms, carefully folded her in half beneath him, so her ankles were by the sides of her head.
Ty Lee let out a long, shuddering moan. Her eyes opened a little; smokey gray slits that glittered with lust and approval. “Yes,” she hissed. “I like that.” She shut her eyes and cried out as Zuko started again, thrusting deeper into her. He exhaled in time with his motions, his rhythm slow yet strong. He growled when he felt Mai touch him, her smooth palms running up and down his back, her mouth hot and wet at the nape of his neck. After one hard, very deep thrust he stopped, pulling out and kneeling back from Ty Lee, releasing her legs and letting her unfold. Mai's arms slipped around his torso, her hands pressing against his pectoral muscles as she kissed and licked his un-scarred ear.
Ty Lee let out a fluttering little sigh. “What's wrong Zuko? Am I too much for you?” she teased.
Zuko shook his head. “No,” he answered, voice hoarse and deep. Ty Lee opened her eyes and saw his face again had that predatory expression. Mai was wrapped around him, her chin resting on his shoulder as she looked down at her, her golden eyes blazing and her smile wicked. Ty Lee swallowed, squirming a little under the lustful regard of her two lovers.
“No,” repeated Zuko. “I just want to try something else now.” He grabbed Ty Lee by the hips, rolling her over and pulling up onto her hands and knees. She squeaked in surprise at how fast and effortlessly he had moved her, then cried out sharply when he took her from behind, filling her to the hilt, his hips grinding against her rear. She clutched and bit at the sheets, writhing as he made love to her in this fashion, his strong, calloused hands at her sides, holding her steady. It was almost too much... She became aware of Mai's laughter echoing in her ears. She turned her head and saw her friend lying on her side close to her, her white teeth bared in a smile somehow both beatific and sinful.
“How do you feel, Ty Lee?” Mai asked.
“Guh... good...” Ty Lee stuttered out. Mai nodded. She reached under her and cupped one of her swaying breasts, rubbing her palm against its erect, sensitive nipple.
“Zuko's everything I told you, isn't he?” said Mai. Ty Lee moaned loudly, just managing to nod. Mai took her nipple between thumb and forefinger, pinching it. “Is he fucking you good, my sweet?”
“Yes! Oh burning Agni, yes!” Mai let go of her breast, now grabbing her by her long braid and yanking her head up, kissing her savagely. Ty Lee screamed into Mai's mouth, her body quaking with an orgasm like a thunderclap.
Zuko watched his two lovers kiss through slitted eyes and felt his eroding control crumble to nothing. He thrust into Ty Lee one last time and climaxed, a burning, delirious rush of ecstasy that made him roar with his release. Mai let go of Ty Lee's braid, and she slumped down flat on her belly, spent and breathless. Zuko collapsed on top of her, having enough awareness to brace himself on his forearms so not to crush her with his weight. They stayed like that for a moment, savoring the almost painful sensation of skin touching sensitive skin, then Zuko dropped a kiss on Ty Lee's neck, another between her shoulders. He withdrew from her and sat back on his haunches and breathed deeply. Mai crawled over to him, embracing him, murmuring softly and kissing him with deep, languid satisfaction. “Agni,” muttered Zuko, resting his forehead against Mai's.
The three lovers were motionless for a time, before Ty Lee broke the silence with a pleased groan. She shrugged her shoulders, shook her head, then rolled over on her back, stretching and arching cat-like. She looked up at her two oldest friends, who were now kissing deeply again, and grinned. “Agni, the two of you are so fuckhot.”
Zuko snorted at this. “Fuckhot?”
“Yeah. It fits you both perfectly.”
“You have such a way with words, Ty Lee,” said Mai with a laugh. She threw herself down next to Ty Lee, catching the smaller girl in a hug and kissing her, Ty Lee murmured happily, returning both the kiss and the embrace.
Zuko groaned. “The two of you are going to kill me.”
“Uh uh,” said Mai. “No dying on us yet - at least not until I get my turn.”
“I love you too, Mai,” Zuko answered sardonically.
“Why don't you come here and show me how much you love me.”
“Give me a little time.”
“How much time?”
He grinned. “About a hundred years.”
All three laughed. “I'm afraid that's a bit too long to wait,” drawled Mai. “Thankfully I gave this a little forethought.” She crawled over Ty Lee, taking up the silver goblet from the nightstand and passing it to Zuko. “I procured us a restorative - it returns potency to men and energy to women. Take just a small swallow.” Zuko complied. The liquid tasted like spearmint, sharp and astringent, bubbling in his mouth and down his throat. “Unh,” he grunted, then handed the goblet to Ty Lee, who took her own sip and giggled. “It tickles,” she said. Mai set the restorative back on the nightstand and poured sweet water into the smaller golden cups and handed them out. They had a few pieces of fruit as well - Ty Lee some strawberries, Mai a handful of white grapes, Zuko a slice of pomegranate. They chatted and laughed while they ate and drank, and by the time they were finished Zuko could feel his blood rushing through him hot and swift again.
Mai eyed him hungrily. “I think you're ready, but let's make sure,” she said, voice husky. She came over to him, kissing him, their tongues playing against each other. She traced the starburst scar on his chest with a finger, sculpted the sharp lines of his abdomen. She began to kiss a trail down his chest. Zuko closed his eyes, letting his head fall back, exhaling deeply as his body tensed in eager anticipation.