Beautifully Wicked Part 5

Jun 29, 2011 12:59

Almost finished, and part of me will be glad. This has been some rather intense writing for me - while I've written fan-erotica/lemons/whatever before, I've never written such a long one.

Beautifully Wicked Part 5

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anonymous June 29 2011, 18:02:02 UTC
This is for sure one of the best lemons I've read. It's the first time I read a threesome, and I before I found this story, I had in my mind that I would enjoy reading Mai/Zuko doing sex in three.
But this fic is just awesome, and definitely changed my mind. I like it because it's not just pure smut, it kinda has that affective and loving atmosphere, and there's respect too. All this still being extremely naughty and deliciously sexy lol
Now I still have a little doubt: how many more parts will there be again?

Update soon :D

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j_harper June 29 2011, 19:13:37 UTC
Thank you. I've tried my best to keep the atmosphere fun and affectionate, and in no way mean-spirited. As I stated when I posted the first part a few weeks back, my model for writing lemons is Phil Foglio's erotic comic _XXXenophile_, which always has an atmosphere of good-natured fun and enjoyment, now matter how weird the scenario.

There's probably going to be just one more part, dealing with the morning after. I started working on it a little tonight, and hopefully will have it done soon. I may do a follow-up story, one a bit more serious, with Zuko, Mai and Ty Lee adjusting to what they did, but if I do write it, it won't be anytime soon.

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