[[Mai gave her a flat, searching look. “You lie worse than Zuko,” she said bluntly.]]
this was so awesome, i burst out laughting. <3
and oooooooh, the post-breakfast scenes were so cute!!!! *head implodes from sweetness* i love how loving and tightly knit you made the whole group feel.
The revised version is up on FF.Net, just to let everyone know. Hopefully I've caught all the errors and smoothed out the rougher portions of the prose.
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Hope to see more Maiko stories from you in the future :D
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this was so awesome, i burst out laughting. <3
and oooooooh, the post-breakfast scenes were so cute!!!! *head implodes from sweetness* i love how loving and tightly knit you made the whole group feel.
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The revised version is up on FF.Net, just to let everyone know. Hopefully I've caught all the errors and smoothed out the rougher portions of the prose.
Cheers!
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