It's a beautiful poem maja. It's achingly poignant...It has a sort of Carl solo lyrics feel to it. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for posting it xxx The 2nd and the 4th stanzas are my favourites. I love them. <3
Thank you very much! This kinda forced itselft on me this morning :) The 2nd is the best clearly, there I felt like I had actually hit the spot. I could've stopped there, but I felt like it needed some development... and closure. "Carls solo lyrics feel" - in 3 I actually quote Carl's part in Vengeance, so there I actually try to adopt the voice of someone else. But the rest I think is me, I didn't try to sound like him. I very much see the place where Carl's lyrics come from, even if I don't always like them, they're often so dark and blunt. But I pretty much do the same thing myself, often. (I have quite a lot of poems, but they're, you know, in Estonian :P ) You're the only person who reads my poems, I honestly appreciate that! XXX
I truly love poetry maja - I always have. You're very welcome - I really enjoyed your poem <3 When i said about Carl - I didn't express myself very well or fully.... you don't sound like him, it's just that the emotions you evoked and the atmosphere of your writing felt as if it were coming from the same sort of place... the same sort of pain. It was the way I felt as I read it, I think. I'm glad yu didn't stop at the second - I'd have never read the 4th one! Noooooo!
Thank you for your lovely words on my story...I have to go offline now...good nighty maja xxx
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It's achingly poignant...It has a sort of Carl solo lyrics feel to it. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for posting it xxx
The 2nd and the 4th stanzas are my favourites. I love them. <3
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This kinda forced itselft on me this morning :) The 2nd is the best clearly, there I felt like I had actually hit the spot. I could've stopped there, but I felt like it needed some development... and closure.
"Carls solo lyrics feel" - in 3 I actually quote Carl's part in Vengeance, so there I actually try to adopt the voice of someone else. But the rest I think is me, I didn't try to sound like him. I very much see the place where Carl's lyrics come from, even if I don't always like them, they're often so dark and blunt. But I pretty much do the same thing myself, often. (I have quite a lot of poems, but they're, you know, in Estonian :P )
You're the only person who reads my poems, I honestly appreciate that! XXX
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You're very welcome - I really enjoyed your poem <3
When i said about Carl - I didn't express myself very well or fully.... you don't sound like him, it's just that the emotions you evoked and the atmosphere of your writing felt as if it were coming from the same sort of place... the same sort of pain. It was the way I felt as I read it, I think.
I'm glad yu didn't stop at the second - I'd have never read the 4th one! Noooooo!
Thank you for your lovely words on my story...I have to go offline now...good nighty maja xxx
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