Thoughts in a carjourney......

[majasonfire]

Neon lights illuminate her way

Comments

[sweetcourt03]

u have a great skill for word use. "Up above a carpet of velvet twinkles with polka dot diamonds" i like that. ur very talented. keep it up, sistah!!

[sweetcourt03]

oooh this is the poem that u wanted to do? w/ the last line of the other poem? yesss... very good! very good!

[majasonfire]

thankee very much, i like that line best too- i thought it was very romantic- nothing is more beautiful than a starry night sky...
Yeah this is the poem, i think it is way better than the other one, i dont like that poem anymore actually...

[sweetcourt03]

lol! and yes, i love the stars... well... not so much now that i took astronomy. i could really smack my teacher around a bit. no, i still love the stars. they're gorgeous. woot!

[nkeryan]

hey, i like your shit, its really good. this poem is the style I enjoy, very elaborate but in a way that is understandable and cool. I hate when people try to make the poem so confusing, its so queer. Yours has a great touch to it, keep on truckin.

[majasonfire]

why thankyoumy dear.
I like confusion in poetry, trying to dechipher the meaning, or make your own meaning out of it, imagination can run riot! This poem is not as confusing as my normal ones, but i like it just the same...
...<3

Just hi.

[bofwa]

I noticed you in a community you seem quite a brilliant writer, wonder if you mind if I add you?

Re: Just hi.

[majasonfire]

why thankyou! its probablt the only good poem i have written, but of course you can :)