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majincammy

Fanfic: Altered States (2/?)

Sep 26, 2011 20:23

Title: Altered States (2/?)
Pairing: Callie/Arizona
Rating: Eventually NC-17
Summary: Tortured pasts lead to interesting futures. (Callie and Arizona as Superheroes)

Disclaimer: I own nothing. I do not intend to profit in any way, shape or form by posting this story. It's for fun, nothing more, and nothing less. Please don't sue me.

A/N: Thank you ( Read more... )

fanfic: arizona robbins, fanfic: callie/arizona, art: fanfiction, fanfic: callie torres

Comments 14

nncyl72 September 27 2011, 01:31:45 UTC

I'm so happy that you posted another awesome chapter!!

majincammy September 27 2011, 02:38:59 UTC

I'm so happy that you read it and commented! <3 I'm having fun with the story and I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

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majincammy September 27 2011, 02:40:08 UTC

Woot! Thank you LJ Person! :D Yeah, I really wanted some good banter and show them getting to know each other. And then Mark was his paranoid funny self. lol Gonna work on the next one soon for yoooou! <3

funkyshaz57 September 27 2011, 09:15:10 UTC

Great chapter, I love the cute flirtyness between the two, Callie as all super cute as she was blushing and crushing lol and Arizona seemed all super sexy with her super confidence!

I liked that Arizona AKA legion (is AZ Legion?) saved Justice Girl! I did wonder if either of them would recognize a trait of there day time persona's, but with Arizona being all Alien like which is a bit weird lol I guess Callie wouldn't have a chance of recognizing anything.

I thought Mark was pretty funny in this or more the way that Callie completely ignored him when they were at breakfast!

Nice work

majincammy September 27 2011, 15:53:39 UTC

Thank you! I liked the banter too, they are totally into each other, I wanted it to show.

Yes, Arizona is Legion! And Arizona did notice Callie, it's the eyes, but it's mostly because of Arizona's abilities. The nanites permit Arizona to change her appearance in ways and that's why her eyes were all white and sorta glowing (which is why Callie thought she was an alien). More will come out eventually about why Arizona chooses to shift her appearance.

Haha, yeah, Mark is totally comic relief. I mean, they're all calling him Alfred, which he hates. lol

Thank you very much, I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

dcmv88 September 27 2011, 15:39:04 UTC

Boom! You did it again! Awesome update, cant wait for more!! :)

majincammy September 27 2011, 15:54:15 UTC

Aw, thank you! I'm really glad you're enjoying it. :D

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majincammy September 27 2011, 21:28:53 UTC

Yeah, Calli and Arizona are totally into each other. ;d And you're definitely right about Lady Justice not being happy about being saved. She's 100% sure she could've gotten herself out of that mess had the alien not interrupted!

I'm still trying to get the man to draw some pictures of both of them for me to post! I will continue to beg him!