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majincammy

Fanfic: Altered States (3/?)

Sep 30, 2011 19:36

Title: Altered States (3/?)
Pairing: Callie/Arizona
Rating: Eventually NC-17
Summary: Tortured pasts lead to interesting futures. (Callie and Arizona as Superheroes)

Disclaimer: I own nothing. I do not intend to profit in any way, shape or form by posting this story. It's for fun, nothing more, and nothing less. Please don't sue me.

A/N: Some action in ( Read more... )

fanfic: arizona robbins, fanfic: callie/arizona, art: fanfiction, fanfic: callie torres

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majincammy September 30 2011, 23:57:47 UTC

Shirtless Avery really turns your brain into a puddle goo. lol We need to start brainstorming so I can get to writing to appease your BatCallie addiction. LOL

Thanks for commenting, your support helps me so much. <3

nncyl72 October 1 2011, 01:21:28 UTC

I LOVED this chapter!
I seem to love each chapter a little bit more than the last one!!
Great job!!!!!!

majincammy October 1 2011, 01:24:01 UTC

Awesome! I'm super glad you loved it and that each chapter is getting better. I'm not sure how long I'll be able to keep that up, but I'll try! :) Thank you so, so much for your kind words and for commenting, you're totally awesome!

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majincammy October 1 2011, 02:02:04 UTC

Oh wow, thank you so much! I'm completely blushing here and I'm so humbled and happy to hear you've been reading and enjoying stories I've written!

When I get comments like this, it really makes me feel so awesome, especially with sharing these stories with everyone. Totally made my day!

Thank you again, really!

pens_co927 October 1 2011, 01:55:29 UTC

Awwwww she saved a kitty. (please wait while amanda solidifies from the mass of goo she has turned into on the floor) I agree that each chapter is better than the previous. LOVED that Lady Justice knew she should know Legion's voice. The date was super cute. Anxiously awaiting the next installment :)
P.S. What kind of fic am I gonna hafta write to lure Binary's identity out of you?

majincammy October 1 2011, 02:08:26 UTC

Haha, yeah, totally had to save the kitty. I've been showing a lot of Callie's baddassery. I'm hoping the ideas keep coming to keep the story interesting. This is the first chapter with a taste of one of villains.

Oh man, I'm so glad the date came off as cute, I was worried, but Drea said the banter was good, so yay! :D

Haha, you already did Arizona as a MMA fighter, what more is out there!? More about Binary will be shared in future chapters as well as Solar. So be patient with me! I don't want to give it away to soon. ;)

pens_co927 October 1 2011, 03:36:10 UTC

*SIGH* I guess I can be patient though it's not one of my better qualities. I need to do a better fic with Arizona MMA fighting cuz that was only a few lines mentioning it as a hobby. Hmmmmmm...we'll see what my muse hits me with ;)

majincammy October 1 2011, 03:40:02 UTC

Haha, that would be pretty hilarious if you do something with that. :D

And honestly, I'm not a patient person either, so I understand your feelings, but I also don't want to ruin it for you! :x

funkyshaz57 October 1 2011, 09:10:53 UTC

Awesome chapter! I really enjoyed it a lot!! Legion made me laugh as she was following Justice girl around with all her rambling about names and hikes! And her Super Awesome comment! I'm wondering because it seems like Callie and Arizona's personalities are still very much present when they are their alter ego's how long it is before one of them figures out the other's secret, I think Arizona's cheery deposition and tone and rambling would be her give away once Callie gets to know her more personally. I'm not quite sure how Arizona would figure Callie's out, maybe the eyes...something was mentioned about that last chapter or just Callie's general tone and attitude...Of course that's if it even happens that way LOL

Loved them spending time together, Callie is just super super sweet when she's all nervous it's very cute! And Arizona is all sweet and confident! Such a pleasure to read!

Awesome stuff!

majincammy October 1 2011, 16:07:02 UTC

Woot, love, love, LOVE your comment! I am trying really hard to keep them in character as much as I can, even in their alter ego's. And yes, Callie is having those moments where she thinks she knows something, but she just can't place it. Arizona is pretty sure she already knows from the eyes, but her nanites kinda let her cheat. lol

Thank you so much! :D I was really happy with this chapter and reading a review like this just confirms I managed to do it right. I hope the next chapter is just as good! Thanks again!