Fanfic: One or Two...

Apr 04, 2012 16:53


Title: One or Two…
Pairing: Arizona/Callie
Rating: PG-13
Summary:  Inspired by events in the upcoming episode regarding Arizona’s number.
Disclaimer: I own nothing.  I do not intend to profit in any way, shape or form by posting this story.  It's for fun, nothing more, and nothing less.

A/N:  I seem to have a current case of writer’s block on my two ( Read more... )

fanfic: arizona robbins, fanfic: callie/arizona, art: fanfiction, fanfic: callie torres

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ladyv85 April 4 2012, 23:19:50 UTC
This was too cute! Loved how you showed Callie feeling a little possessive instead of jealous. Awesome read.

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majincammy April 4 2012, 23:41:29 UTC
Yes! I really hope this need to know from Callie comes from this possessive place, instead of an insecure one. All season long they have really seemed happy and in a really good place. I don't want that to unravel. lol Wishful thinking, I'm sure. ;) Thank you so so much, I'm so excited you liked it!

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priscilla951 April 5 2012, 01:00:55 UTC
Great job! Needed some humor and Callie verbal diarrhea to help time go by. Your humor is spot on with the shows and it's easy to see the actors play out the story.

Loved:
Callie wondering about Arizona's "face"
- Forgetting to get food when in the cafeteria.
- The easy banter between all the characters
- Everybody knowing everybody's business (except it seems Arizona's 2 nurses) LOL
- The "type" discussion, best bit about Mark getting grey though you may have missed a chance at bad hair dye - not now, but a few episodes ago it was a monstrosity. Special thanks for this: “And I’m sorry that my past love life has really been on the airwaves around here. I think I understand, now more than ever, how that has probably made you feel in the past. I’m sorry ( ... )

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majincammy April 5 2012, 01:06:30 UTC
I am so thrilled the story was up to your expectations. You gave me some really awesome inspiration and it really pushed my muse into action. I actually had a dream and woke up (really early, mind you!) and I couldn't go back to sleep until I got up and wrote the first half of this. The last time I had such a fluid story was the first chapter of Fix You, so I was really happy.

I'm so glad I seemed to have got it right. I really hope Callie's concerns in the actual episode are more based on possessiveness than insecurity, but time will tell.

Oh, and omg, ty for the most awesome compliment. The fact it's easy to see the actors play out the story, just an amazing compliment. Thanks again!!

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mossmomma April 5 2012, 01:02:05 UTC
Loved it

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majincammy April 5 2012, 01:12:19 UTC
Awesome. Thank you so much! <3

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fredward54 April 5 2012, 03:02:41 UTC
Excellent :) I really liked this! I am excited for whatever we'll end up seeing in the episode tomorrow, so this was pretty perfect. I love getting more backstory on the characters and you write it so well! Props.

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majincammy April 5 2012, 03:08:51 UTC
I, too, am extremely excited about the episode. Arizona is my favorite, so getting more of her and her back story makes me so utterly happy and excited. I hope it's not a let down. lol

So glad you liked it! I hope we see a bit of Callie's possessiveness tomorrow and that he concerns aren't based on insecurity. They've seemed so happy this season, so I went off that. :)

Thanks again!

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xena_and_gabby April 5 2012, 03:15:24 UTC
This was great! LOVED it all. Loved the banter (I love banter!) and especially loved How Callie kept trying to get everyone to shut up lol. And is it weird that it warms my heart that Arizona realized from, presumably, across the room that Callie didn't get any lunch and brought her some? Or is that just me?

And this whole part:

“I just don’t understand why, Calliope. Am I not doing my job right?” Arizona licked her lips and frowned, “Do you not believe me when I tell you that I love you?” She raised her right hand and ran it through her hair before glancing at Callie’s eyes. “Do I not tell you enough that you’re the only one that matters? That you’re the love of my life and that I love my life and our little girl? Am I not telling you enough? Maybe I need to do more…”

Kinda broke my heart a little... Arizona being insecure that maybe she is failing at telling Callie how much she loves her... sigh.

What I didn't like:

YOU TEASED SEXY TIMES AND DIDN'T BRING ME ANY! ;)

Again, loved it! And thanks for the shout out *

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majincammy April 5 2012, 03:22:29 UTC
I said I would try to include secytimes, but it just didn't happen. I'm sorry I failed you on that part! lol

As for the rest, I'm super glad you liked! And I'm glad you caught the food thing. Arizona always checks on her Calliope in my mind. ;) And I totally wanted to pull your heart strings there. Arizona was totally worried about Callie's insecurities, when it was just Callie being a caveman. lol Er, cavewoman. ;)

And you deserved the shout out. You helped me get to it and I actually posted something I really enjoyed writing and liked how it came out. :D Thanks again!

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xena_and_gabby April 5 2012, 14:46:11 UTC
No no. You teased sexy times IN the story :-p You were definitely all about the maybes on Twitter ;)

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