Fanfic: The Sound of Silence

[majincammy]

Title:  The Sound of Silence
Pairing: Arizona/Callie
Rating: R
Summary: Speculation after the crash.
Disclaimer: I own nothing.  I do not intend to profit in any way, shape or form by posting this story.  It's for fun, nothing more, and nothing less.

A/N:  I started this after episode 8x23, so I didn’t have all the info that happened in the finale, so

Comments

[orangeroughy]

Okay, first, it's so great to read something new from you!

Second, this was amazing! I echo the previous comments. This was so dark and intense. Thank you very much for posting!

[majincammy]

I so love it when you comment. <3

Thank you very much. I've been having some trouble writing recently, so getting something worthwhile out has been a major breakthrough. ;)

Awesome, thank you again, so so much. I know it took awhile for me to get it together, but I'm really glad that people seem to be enjoying it and that I got to an organic intensity for these characters. :D

[funkyshaz57]

I really enjoyed it and I'd love to see a second part..I know you say it's a one shot but if I'm super nice to you will you think about doing a second part? Pretty please..with cheeries on top and all things nice

[majincammy]

You liked the angst here? That is totally like the biggest compliment ever

[carelikecrazy]

Wow - this was really lovely. And heartbreaking. I loved how you wrote about the silence. It was chilling and oh so real.

Callie's arrival and their reunion was beautiful, particularly the dialogue about Nick, how proud he was, how Callie canceled her schedule to be with him for Arizona, how Nick saw how much they loved each other. I especially liked when Arizona confessed, "...you fixed me in a way that I never thought possible…”.

I only hope she can remember that as she heals from her injuries (physical and emotional) and this new pain and lets Callie back in. Perhaps it is the journey back to that realization that is the part two of this story. I would love to see how you get them there.

[majincammy]

Thank you so, so much. I really tried to be as organic as possible and raw with their emotions. I'm so glad that it comes across. Especially the stuff with Nick. It's hard to imagine what she was going through.

Solid idea, I'm hoping I'll come up with something soon since many people are asking for a follow up. :)

Thank you again, you have no idea how much I appreciate your comment. <3

[carelikecrazy]

Yes, yes! Organic & raw emotion is what made this fic ring so very true. You did a great job with it. It really came across authentically. I'm sure it was quite emotionally exhausting to write it, but again...that's what made the story so dynamic. I'm hoping it had some cathartic effect for you as well.

Thanks again. Many of us are looking forward to a resolution for our girls. Or whatever else inspires you next. You have given yourself such a beautiful set-up with this chapter, though.

Cheers!

[englishstrawbie]

I finally got round to reading this, much later than I intended. What a wonderful piece of writing. Poor Arizona, I love the idea that what haunts her is the silence. You write her so broken. :( Her rant towards Callie is heartbreaking. Really great story!

[majincammy]

You're so sweet, thank you so, so much! I'm glad you got a chance to read it and enjoyed it and that I got the feelings out of what I intended to write. Makes me totally feel successful. Thanks again! <3