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Laws of Attraction - Chapter Forty-Three: No Time Like the Present [Part Four]

Sep 18, 2012 22:58

Title: Laws of Attraction
Author: Major Roon
Fandom: The Closer
Pairing: Brenda/Sharon
Rating: NC-17/M

( Chapter Forty-Three: No Time Like the Present [Part Four] )

laws of attraction, the closer

Comments 15

sisterbiscuit September 19 2012, 01:18:43 UTC

An impressive end to a massive, and oh-so-good fic. What you've created it pretty darn amazing, and I'm glad to know you have a sequel in mind.

I've just really enjoyed the journey and relationship you built....it all read as very realistic and messy, as such things would be.

I'll look forward to reading whatever you write next....and I'm glad this fic also brought some brightness to your personal life. Can't beat that!

major_roon September 19 2012, 20:18:24 UTC

Indeed, this fic has brightened up my life in more ways than one but meeting my better half certainly was the best.

I do love this community though and all the authors and readers, it's great fun with you guys.

I'm glad you enjoyed the fic and I really hope the sequel will be received as well as LoA has. Thank you very much and hope to post soon :D

kdtb September 21 2012, 05:16:03 UTC

Thank you thank you for creating such a wonderful epic story, its been so awesome to read this story and to see the progression (as it were) of their relationship. I'm so happy to hear Sharon's pov, especially now. I can't wait to see how the sequel pans out because I'll never get enough :)

outuendo_11 September 25 2012, 16:24:36 UTC

So I guess I had been overwhelmed by how long this story was, but I happened to glance at one of the later chapters and realized I had to go back to the beginning. I am so glad I did. The emotions in this, Brenda's thought process, everything was just wonderful. Wanting what she can't have, getting it, it not being enough...yet unable to really emotionally connect and realize what it is she's doing ( ... )

tayryn September 30 2012, 15:54:31 UTC

I very much like Sharon's conversation with Morales. She's found a friend, and if anyone needs and deserves one, tis Sharon!!

As the blonde wrapped her fingers around Sharon’s wrist and pulled her hand from her hip down between her legs, she instinctively knew.

It felt great. It was what she was meant to be.

One last time, Sharon thought, also hoping that, once she was inside of her, making her come in the bathroom at the very place they worked at, she could safely say that they had broken even that last rule and it would make it easier to say goodbye.Okay, I'll be honest... I wouldn't have minded seeing that! *G* What?? I'm honest... and you write them having sex so fabulously!! *G ( ... )