Comments | majutsu_shi: OMG. SEX. FINALLY. [Part 2]

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OMG. SEX. FINALLY. [Part 2]

Mar 03, 2007 21:37

Characters: Hyuuga Neji and Uchiha Sasuke
Setting: December 28, I think. In the Blue Butterfly. At midnight. At the same time as Hinata's log with Chouji after the Hinata and Neji meeting.
Warnings: Oral. Anal. SEX. Yes.
Notes: OMG. This is so late and it's all my fault. x-x I'm so sorry, Sasu-chan! Forgive meeeeeee.

( He didn't want to think. He only wanted to feel. )

sasuke, neji

Comments 6

insultthedevil March 5 2007, 03:40:57 UTC

First and foremost, I must congratulate my adorable foolish little brother for finally having a one night stand! ♥

Anyways.

JESUS. THAT WAS SO HOT. I'D SAY MORE BUT I'M NOT SUPPOSED TO BE ON THE COMPUTER RIGHT NOW.

I loved it. *_*;;

terminalmadness March 5 2007, 21:45:21 UTC

BELLY.

insultthedevil March 5 2007, 22:09:28 UTC

YES.

terminalmadness March 6 2007, 12:36:50 UTC

HA HA LET'S SPAM TALKING ABOUT AOI'S GORGEOUS BODY.

terminalmadness March 5 2007, 21:44:32 UTC

I felt so guilty about reading this, because I printed it out and took it with me to school to read, and I read about half at the bus stop, then the rest in Algebra... man... I felt like a sinner XD

Commentary!

*He was a solitary person. And how he could be thinking so much about a single man made no sense in his mind. Absolutely none. *COUGH*itachi*COUGHCOUGHHACK*

*Sasuke had never felt like this. He had never lusted this badly and intensely for another person. He had never kissed another, had never make such sounds as a reply for sensual touches. ... That doesn't quite correspond with me and Stacie's smut >_> Remember all those times we asked if we could godmod? Well... Shisui's rather affectionate for both of his adorable baby cousins... don't shoot me.I will officially never be able to hear/read the word "Length" or "Engorged" without having a laughing fit. Euphemisms make me gigglesnort to the max, which means I can't use them >___>; So like, I'll be writing really pretty, romantic smut, and all of the sudden there's "cock". ( ... )

split_the_gates March 5 2007, 23:50:13 UTC

Neji, I must congratulate you for so thoroughly enjoying your Springtime of Youth! *winks and poses with a thumbs-up* I sincerely hope you meet your partner again soon, but try to be a little more considerate next time, eh? Chouji's going to have to replace quite a bit of straw there...

((GODDAMN THAT WAS HOT. *__________* I loved the details sooo much... um lemme pick out some...

...white dots dancing before dilated irises.

...halos of white smoke rose up from the heat and penetrated the cold air.

The use of the word 'pliant' to describe Sasuke's spent body. I dunno, I just really liked that *drools*

And, of course, the two hours of ass-banging. <3

Just a few tenses and mispellings here and there... but I'm glad you guys got it up when you did xD it's about time!))