Apo Pantos Kakodaimonos [2/11]

[makacakeee]

Title: Apo Pantos Kakodaimonos - 2
Pairing: OnTae
Genre: Romance/Supernatural/Slight Angst
Rating: PG-13 for slight violence
Summary: Onew was cursed to forever walk between Hell and Earth as a demon, lonely and unfeeling. He had no memory of why he was cursed, nor what the curse truly meant. All he knew was that bad things seemed to happen to

Comments

[shawolworlld]

May I say, that summary just drew me in.. I haven't seen a story this interesting in a while.
Can't wait to see how it unfolds.

[makacakeee]

Thank you so much! I hope that the rest of the story keeps your interest then ^_^ Summaries are so hard to write and I never know if they really work...I'm glad I didn't do half bad with this one :)

[diamondacequeen]

I like that technically we still don't know which character is the narrator. It's like I'm attached to him and I'm learning his story, but I still don't have a name or physical description and that adds a bit of mystery to the whole thing, you know? I really like that. And it does seem pretty lonely just walking around night after night. Luckily, it seems like his time on Earth lasts longer than his time in Hell because of the pace at which time moves. I wonder if our narrator will ever remember what happened to cause him to receive this sort of punishment. And, of course, I wonder if this trip will lead him to his beautiful human again. I'm really interested to see how their relationship will play out. You've created such an interesting story. I've never read anything like this and I'm really excited about it! :)

[makacakeee]

I never realized that I don't really give a character name or description for the narrator. I will a little later, but really the reader would kind of only know if they read the summary. Hmmmmmm...Well, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. There's a lot more to come! Some of your ponderings will eventually be answered :) I hope the story continues to keep your interest~