Apo Pantos Kakodaimonos [5/11]

[makacakeee]

Title: Apo Pantos Kakodaimonos - 5
Pairing: OnTae
Genre: Romance/Supernatural/Slight Angst
Rating: PG-13 for slight violence
Summary: Onew was cursed to forever walk between Hell and Earth as a demon, lonely and unfeeling. He had no memory of why he was cursed, nor what the curse truly meant. All he knew was that bad things seemed to happen to

Comments

[diamondacequeen]

Finding out more and more! And I can't believe Taemin was so honest about liking Onew, no matter the capacity in which he likes Onew. He whispered it, but he still said it. And Onew's story was really kinda freaking unsettling. Like. It was kinda scary, so you're definitely doing something right with the descriptions lol. And for a minute there I thought Onew was going to be able to stay on Earth during the daytime. Maybe I haven't been paying attention, but I feel like he always gets dragged back before he can even really see the sun. Mm, we're halfway there now and I'm really curious to see what happens next. I wanna know why Taemin is so freaking special, cause shouldn't he be like dead or something? Mmmmm SO INTERESTING!

[makacakeee]

Would it be bad to say I'm glad it was a little scary for you? xD I'm glad it turned out well. And yeah, Onew falls back to Hell before the sun because as soon as light is about to hit him, he goes back. Kind of like he evaporates into wispy shadows as soon as light is about to touch him. That's how I picture it anyway. Hmmm...what is so special about Taemin, anyway? Kekeke >.< I've left a few hints so far, but you'll get some more next chapter and a BIG hint/reveal planned for chapter 7 :)

[diamondacequeen]

No, it's good that I felt a little scared! It means you're writing so I can feel it. :) And idk I guess I just always pictured him getting sucked in when the sun starts peeking over the horizon and it's still dark out. OMG now I'm really excited for these next two parts!! :D