Comments | make5hift_wings: Third Time Lucky

make5hift_wings

Third Time Lucky - Putting it all together

Mar 13, 2012 11:43

spn, gabriel_bigbang, fic:third time lucky

Comments 8

scyllaya March 16 2012, 22:38:28 UTC

This was utterly perfect. I was blinking at the bachelor thing a lot, although it was funny XD

The rest was amazing. Gabriel frustrated me with being so blind for so long I really wanted to smack him on the head, but all is well and I really loved the ending. Loved how Gabriel returned and yeah okay, Gabe and Dean are always scorching hot and funny and kinda cute together, so you nailed that one too.

Thanks for the fic, it was awesome to read it :D

make5hift_wings March 17 2012, 16:00:33 UTC

Thanks for the awesome comment. Yeah I was trying to make the bachelor bit odd, kinda choppy and segmented out of real life like the show would be.

It took me ages to get Gabriel to where I wanted him, oblivious!Gabriel is oblivious.

xxxholiclover March 16 2012, 22:39:08 UTC

Oh my god I love this so much! Adorable and sooooo sexy! :) I love teenage Dean and Gabe, too cute for words. :D love the ending, I wonder though....where Castiel went once he learned that mating was possible? heh, did Cas have someone in mind? :d

make5hift_wings March 17 2012, 16:02:30 UTC

Icon Love!!! Poor Richard (or lucky, lucky Richard).

Thank you. I think Cas was away to check before he pounced on a certain shaggy-haired sasquatch... maybe a timestamp, maybe not...

darth_firefly March 17 2012, 01:14:54 UTC

Oh, this was awesome. Fantastic work!

make5hift_wings March 17 2012, 16:03:15 UTC

Thank you sweetie. Yours was awesome too, should probably comment that on your fic tho!

elfgirljen March 17 2012, 03:19:16 UTC

That was amazing! Loved it from start to end.
And the artwork? It rocked!

make5hift_wings March 17 2012, 16:04:13 UTC

The artwork RULES! Go leave her love - she really pulled through, despite everything.

Oh and thank you!