Comments | make_love_last: Babysitter (Joick; R)

make_love_last

Babysitter (Joick; R)

Apr 13, 2009 17:07

It’s times like these that Joe absolutely fucking hates his parents. Not just strongly dislikes. Not detests. Hates. Times like these when his dad is standing there in front of the three of them seated on the couch after a show, grilling them about all the things they did wrong.

He knows his dad’s words don’t bother Kevin much. Kevin will just ( Read more... )

fiction: fan - jonas brothers, rating: r, pairing: joe jonas/nick jonas

Comments 7

severus_falter April 13 2009, 23:27:07 UTC

Aw... *kisses you* Oh I hope there's more coming? Because they're so damn perfect together. God. <3

make_love_last April 14 2009, 01:24:36 UTC

:D

IDK if I'll continue it. It's been my experience in the past that i kind of supersuck at chaptered fics, but we'll see. Haha

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make_love_last April 14 2009, 01:26:47 UTC

Haha IKR. If I could have Joe there to take care of me every night, it probably would not be such a good situation. I would def be a boozer. Lol :)

I was actually thinking about doing something like that. :) I'll see what comes out of my mind next.

Also, thanks! you're so sweet. :D

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make_love_last April 14 2009, 01:44:26 UTC

Haha I'll try to work it out. :)

jljso April 14 2009, 03:02:22 UTC

Gah, this totally got me!

The scene with Nick sobbing in the bathroom was so heartbreaking. I loved how Joe just sat there with him comforting him. For 30 minutes. I loved how Nick stopped sobbing and kinda held his breath when Joe first entered and then how once Nick knew it was Joe, he just let himself go again.

I loved how Joe freaked out on the guy trying to give drugs to Nick. Protective!Joe is the best : )

And I also loved the image of Joe laying his head down on Nick's knee - that whole last scene was so great.

make_love_last April 14 2009, 03:19:36 UTC

:) Thanks. I'm glad you liked it!

But yeah, it was almost hard to write just because I was like "Aww, Nicholas" the whole time. Haha

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make_love_last April 15 2009, 05:37:59 UTC

Aww, thanks so much! :)

As much as I don't want this to really be their life, I honestly feel like there's got to be something there, because honestly, no one's life or family is that perfect.
Idk but yeah Kevin is kind of the best big brother ever just because he seems like he always just knows how to handle them from a distance without overstepping boundaries.