Oh, honey, you should DEFFINITELY make it into something really long, and I'm glad that you want to. I love the theme already. This was a gorgeous snippet. It's great when writers in this fandom genuinely explore the nuances of the boys' feelings about their religion, fame, parents, and (especially) the Disney Machine behind what they are "supposed" to say and how they are "told" to behave. Many apologies for my poorly written comment; I am up way to early, even for me. Heh heh. But, yes. Beautiful job, lovie. I hope you turn this into a chapter fic. I'm looking forward to reading more this. You're a wonderful writer.
And if you want to...oh, I dunno...throw in some explicit Joick porn into those chapters BY ALL MEANS DO SO...Not that I'm, you know, BEGGING for it or anything. Pssshaaawww! Why would I do that?
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And if you want to...oh, I dunno...throw in some explicit Joick porn into those chapters BY ALL MEANS DO SO...Not that I'm, you know, BEGGING for it or anything. Pssshaaawww! Why would I do that?
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And yeah I'm pretty sure I will continue this. :) Thanks for the great compliment. (It wasn't written badly at all!!)
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sometimes he wants to be a moaning, writhing mess, completely undone and begging for more: harder, faster, deeper.
jesus christ
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