Vacation // Joick // PG-13

[make_love_last]

They’re in the car, on the way to the airport, and the silence is twisting between them, overgrown and horrible and altogether crushing to endure. Because this time, they’re not going off together. It’s not like they’re leaving for tour, off to New York or Florida or wherever it’s starting. Mom and Dad and Frankie and Kevin and the dozens of other

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[severus_falter]

This just seriously... Broke my heart. You did everything - everything perfectly.

And it completely broke my heart <3

[make_love_last]

Aww, thanks, bb!

Hopefully the massive fic that I'm working on right now from your prompt (not telling which one :D) will heal your heart with adorable pre-slashness. <33

[severus_falter]

Haha, I wish sweetheart, but fluff/adorableness breaks my heart WAY worse than angst.

But I'll deal.

I just CANNOT wait to see it <333

[make_love_last]

:D Well, I hope you LOVE it, heart breaking or not. Haha It includes angst, too. So there's that

[iheartvmars07]

The whole last paragraph broke my poor wittle heart

[make_love_last]

I hope that's a good thing! ;) ♥

[jljso]

Gah this was so good. I've been loving the idea of vacation separation stories and this was perfect.

What especially got me was Joe and Nick not properly saying goodbye to one another - and Nick almost waiting for Joe to grab for him and pull him into a goodbye hug. Ah.

I also really loved Nick wearing Joe's sweater and then balling it up to sleep on and smelling his brother. And then Nick falling into Joe's bed to sleep. This line was awesome: "He drifts off to sleep clutching at the sheet for dear life."

And the ending was perfect - Joe gripping his hair and Nick pulling his hands away? Gah.

Lovely job!

[make_love_last]

Haha Yeah I have like a running list of fic ideas saved in my computer, and this was one that I wrote down back when it actually happened in real life but never did much with. :)

It kind of broke my heart to write them so distant from each other. ♥

Thanks!

[shkmhlove]

That was just really heart breaking to read all of that emotion between the two of them..

[make_love_last]

Yeah it was kind of hard to write. Haha I am WAY too attached to these boys.

[adinasourisme]

beautiful.

and nothing even happened, really.
that's the beauty of it.

if you get what i mean? xD

love this.

love you :)

[make_love_last]

Yeah I know what you mean. Like their relationship is kind of subtle but totally there at the same time? I don't even know of that makes sense. Lol

Thanks! :)