Comments | make_love_last: God, Give Us Love In The Time That We Have (Pt 1)

make_love_last

God, Give Us Love In The Time That We Have (Pt 1)

Jun 30, 2009 14:58

Joseph, fifteen years old and scared out of his mind, stares wide eyed at a spot on the wall, his form still and tense with nerves. If any of his prayers are ever going to be answered, he wants it to be this one. His mouth forms the words over and over, the silent pleas falling from his lips in a desperate bid to the heavens.
Don’t take him away ( Read more... )

genre: pre-slash, fiction: fan - jonas brothers, rating: r, pairing: joe jonas/nick jonas

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mediaville July 1 2009, 01:40:30 UTC

I pretty much NEVER read WIPs, because I just hate getting all into things and then having to stop before I get to the end, but. SHIT. This is really good. Keep going!

make_love_last July 1 2009, 13:25:23 UTC

Thanks! Glad you decided to read it! <3 :D

invadertay107 July 1 2009, 04:17:34 UTC

GAHH. I am obsessed with this. Somehow them switching bodies is totally believable...? Idek. (:

make_love_last July 1 2009, 13:24:55 UTC

Awesome! Thanks! :D

jljso July 1 2009, 05:00:12 UTC

I loved so much of this. How did you manage to make this read so incredibly realistically!? Joe and Nick are in each other's body and that just seems so totally OK here when normally I would be like WTF?

Favorite parts have to Nick making Joe Mac'n'Cheese (I kid you not I craved it after reading this - I loved Joe's reasoning for why he loved the Mac'n'Cheese), Joe deciding to make Nick an exhibitionist, Nick waking Joe up in bed so sweetly and the two cuddling, Joe's issues with getting himself/Nick off - I really love the bit right after they were both through, where the two were just holding each other - Joe stroking Nick's back and then calling him a deviant. Heh.

So excited to hear that there is so much more to this story. Can't wait!

make_love_last July 1 2009, 13:24:34 UTC

Haha thanks! Dude, I def had to go make myself some mac and cheese after I wrote that. lol

smithdidit July 1 2009, 07:24:44 UTC

oh my god, this was beautiful.

i love your characterization of them, it fits so well.

make_love_last July 1 2009, 13:23:27 UTC

Thanks so much! <3

gatesofshadows July 1 2009, 11:39:24 UTC

sadkas..confusing much i was like concentrating on it so much it was almost real o.O
Love the detaill, really good job

mooore sooon
<333 (:

make_love_last July 1 2009, 13:22:06 UTC

Thanks! It's great to hear that I made such a crazy idea seem believable. Haha :D