All They Need (Joick; PG-13)

Apr 11, 2009 23:11

He takes a deep breath in through his nose, allowing his eyes to fall closed. He loves what he does. Really. But sometimes it gets to be too much. People telling him where to be, what to say, who to talk to. It’s all a little overwhelming. He massages his temples with his calloused fingers, vainly attempting to block out the world, to get his own ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, genre: fluff, fiction: fan - jonas brothers, pairing: joe jonas/nick jonas, genre: angst

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jljso April 12 2009, 15:21:41 UTC
My favorite place for those two to ever be will always be in a bed snuggled up together. This was so perfect. I loved how natural you made everything seem between them and how "they both visibly relax when their legs touch under the covers." I loved that bit.

I really, really like this description: "Their limbs are tangled like the thin chain of a necklace."

My favorite line of the whole thing has to be this: "Joe smells like comfort, like home." I think I liked it so much because with the amount that they travel, etc. it would make sense that they wouldn't consider a physical place to be "home" but rather each other.

And I LOVED the last two paragraphs about everything they are to each other. The last line really made me smile - dysfunctional, messed up - their just like "whatever." : )

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make_love_last April 12 2009, 16:38:13 UTC
Thanks so much. :) I'm totally new to this whole them together thing, so I was kind of nervous about writing them and IDK. Haha

It really does seem like they're so close that they would consider each other home. It's like the one thing in their world that doesn't go crazy or constantly change.

But yeah. Thanks! :)

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severus_falter April 12 2009, 22:30:41 UTC
That kind of says EVERYTHING that Joick is about. Honey, you have my greatest respect, and adoration. This is doubtlessly perfect.

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make_love_last April 12 2009, 22:44:48 UTC
Aww, thanks so much. :) I'm glad you liked it.

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make_love_last April 14 2009, 01:23:26 UTC
Aww, thanks! :)

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