You're the One I'm Loosing [Standalone]

Jan 05, 2008 20:39

Title: You're the One I'm Loosing [Standalone]
Author: makeapanicscene
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Ryan/Brendon
POV: Third, Ryan-centric
Summary: Ryan wants to go out in the pouring rain and feel alive for once.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything
Author Notes: This unbeta'd and I wanted to write something hopeless and lonesome for a change. This is dedicated to: xstockpiledmmrs and tnksfrthmmrs
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xstockpiledmmrs January 6 2008, 03:01:15 UTC
falkelaw;jiajflk

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xstockpiledmmrs January 6 2008, 03:04:30 UTC
man.
you. have. me. speechless.
and i was like 'dedication? ohmanily' :D
it was so lonely and sad, and perfect

wonderful.
truly.

FC!

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makeapanicscene January 6 2008, 03:07:26 UTC
yay! FC!
aww thank you! how can i not dedicate this to you? =]
i'm glad you liked it.

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makeapanicscene January 6 2008, 05:39:55 UTC
aww thanks! you will hopefully soon =D

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yellochckrdcars January 6 2008, 05:52:01 UTC
Standalone my ass. |:<

But still, it is perfect, the way you ended it. (:
Amazing. <3

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makeapanicscene January 6 2008, 05:56:14 UTC
what, you think this wasnt a standalone? =/

thanks, i tried to have a somewhat good ending to it. =)

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yay_for_gays January 6 2008, 06:58:37 UTC
ADRI!! That was Soooo Sad!! But I Love It!! & Y Is This a standalone??

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makeapanicscene January 6 2008, 20:44:17 UTC
hehe hey ashley! =]
i havent made a fic/standalone thats sad and i wanted to for a change. i wanted a short fic just to satisfy what i wanted to write and what i felt like. im not quite sure if i want to continue or not..... should i? =/

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yay_for_gays January 6 2008, 22:03:54 UTC
*Nods Head* Yeeess! I like this :D Even though its sad.

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makeapanicscene January 6 2008, 22:49:23 UTC
ohh okay. if i continue to write it, it probally will be sad but im not quite sure. i have to plan it out i guess. i'll let you know

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guyliner_rox January 6 2008, 11:14:36 UTC
Aw awesome! I really love standing in the rain! And I loved the ending so much, it made me laugh though trying to imagine what Brendon must of thought as he looked out his window and saw Ryan asleep on the grass in the rain, random lol. You could totally continue this! There is so much scope for a sequel where Ry knocks on his door to give the blanket back and they finally meet properly... xxx

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makeapanicscene January 6 2008, 20:49:37 UTC
yeah me too! =D thanks so much for commenting
i kinda wanted the ending to combine all of the feelings that were in this story.
Are you sure that i should continue this? i kinda left this in suspence and maybe in a cliffhanger.

But anyone! let me know if i should continue this! =S

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roadsidefury January 7 2008, 00:29:49 UTC
If you think that you can continue it well, then I vote that you do it!

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