Sempre e para sempre

Jan 25, 2009 13:20


So, I had some spare time, and I decided to write a one hitter fiction about Cristiano. Umm, here it is under the cut. :) Enjoy f-listers! And constructive criticism is very welcome! Any ideas on where I should improve is great. Enjoy reading! :)

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ytumamatb January 25 2009, 21:42:06 UTC
this is cute ^______^ u totally portray the simple life of two youngsters in a Portuguese village.
P.S.: work on ur lj cut, it's not there.
have fuckies *fuckies*

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makemeeperfect January 25 2009, 23:57:06 UTC
Oh yeah! I couldn't do it the non-html way. :( I don't know why, but I figured it out. Thanks for commenting hun. :)

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ytumamatb January 26 2009, 00:53:52 UTC
my pleasure :)
have fuckies *fuckies*

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