#150 The Fatemaster

Nov 02, 2015 19:41

Title: The Fatemaster
Prompt: #150
Rating: PG-13
Length: ~8360 words
Summary: Fate is capricious but also an undeniable thing of beauty.
Notes: Dear prompter, first and foremost, thank you very much for the challenging prompt. I took some minor liberties with it and the bonus points, but nothing too drastic, I assure you. I might expand on this ( Read more... )

2015, day 9, rating: pg-13

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hunsmine November 4 2015, 20:09:10 UTC
Super cute! I loved how they were so worried about losing each other❤️ also, grandpa Oh and his love for books was really sweet 🙌🏻 great story!

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capricious_moon November 11 2015, 16:04:46 UTC
This comment is so nice ;_; Thank you for reading, I'm glad you liked it~! ^o^

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bianca747 November 4 2015, 23:39:45 UTC
This is lovely. I like reading soulmate AUs and your interpretation of the red string of faith was interesting. I don't think I've seen it written like this before.
Jongin's second profession feels like a gift and a curse because he can see everything (kind of). I giggled out loud when Jongin and Sehun met second time and Jongin called him ₩100. I liked how their relationship grew over time and felt scared when Sehun's string turned read because of what it could mean. The ending made me happy.
Thank you for writing this! <3

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capricious_moon November 11 2015, 16:08:30 UTC
Ahaha, I've always wanted to write a red string of fate fic and at the same time put a different spin on it as best as I could, so this is the result of it ^^;

Jongin's second profession feels like a gift and a curse because he can see everything (kind of)

Yes, that is true. It's difficult leading a life where you can see things people normally don't, so even with its advantages there are corresponding downsides to it.

I was tickled by the thought of Jongin calling Sehun that so I tossed it in there LOL. I'm glad the ending made you happy ^^

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment; it's much appreciated! ^^

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pandaanddragon November 8 2015, 18:18:15 UTC
What a story. I've read a quite a few of red string or soulmates stories and this is one of the best. It's well-written. And this being not a rated M fic yet you feel all the love and the angst in the words you chose. I just couldn't describe it. :) I would love to know who wrote this, follow you and wait for your next sekai stories.

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capricious_moon November 11 2015, 16:10:58 UTC
Hello! Here I am, the writer of this fic ^^

I've read a quite a few of red string or soulmates stories and this is one of the best

Oh no, what do I do, this is such high praise, you are too kind ;___;

Cries even if a scene called for something rated I don't think I would have been able to write it; then again, this is the type of fic that can stand alone just fine without it too ^^;

Thank you so much for this comment, it really made me smile. I hope I will be able to write more Sekai fics in the future ^^

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pandaanddragon November 14 2015, 14:33:16 UTC
I do hope that you write a few more sekai stories in the future :3 I would love to read them all.

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ext_2883148 March 7 2016, 14:42:31 UTC
this is my sweetest candy :***

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capricious_moon March 14 2016, 15:46:42 UTC
Ahh~, I'm happy you think of it that way ;u;

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rosevic87 March 12 2016, 20:35:15 UTC
Awwww! I figured but still hoped that Jongin's string would tie with Sehun's :) and the baekchen xD

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capricious_moon March 14 2016, 15:47:34 UTC
It was bound to happen, but I'm glad it worked out for them ^^ As for Baekchen, well... LOL.

Thank you for reading~!

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