#24 This Long Journey Home {7/7}

[maknaerulez]

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[chiara_sk]

Spot

OMG i'll be back with a long comment!!!

[chiara_sk]

Naz

[chiara_sk]

Your Jongin.... It's interesting how you chose jongin as the one making the almost unforgivable mistake here. He's always painted as this very ideal guy in sekai fics (or at least in my mind? lol), so to think of him breaking sehun's heart in the most heartless way, i had the same reaction as sehun: no fucking way! But then, jongin after all is just a human being. he's gonna make mistakes, he fall preys to his own insecurities and is in no way infallible. I believe every affair is different, so when i read any infidelity fics, I always attempt to deconstruct the affair, analyze its every detail and facet. And the thing with all infidelity cases is that, the cheating partner is the direct participant in the affair while the one being cheated on remains the bystander, someone looking in from the outside. So the affair here is borne out of Jongin's own demons, it's intricately linked to jongin, not sehun, and as i am also an onlooker like Sehun, I started asking WHY? 2 months, it's not a long time, but it isn't short either. I kept

omg

[0412mab]

I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH!!!!!!! thank you a million times for such a piece of art!!!!

while i was reading i felt this torturous knot in my heart, the emotions are real and so so strong

this whole fics was so sad but breathtakingly beautiful at the same time, so full of feelings that captivated me from beginning to end

I will write a larger comment later when my feelings are not a completely mess and my english doesn't betray me this much

shit even using the word betray make me sobs byee

more like see you later

[anielluicca]

omg this fic is amazing!
i lost count how many times i teared up while reading this ;n; everytime sehun cries i just wanna hug him and bawl with him ;___; the emotions here were just so real; i can totally feel the pain /sobs
i love the krislu here... they're always there for dear sehunnie ;o; i'm totally like luhan here if anyone tries to hurt precious sehunnie ;;
i'm lost for words... this is just way beyond amazing *gives you dear author-nim a virtual bear hug* i love this oh so much; thank you very much for writing this!

[cehune]

honestly first I thought I had to read almost 60k about my baby sehun just not getting over his heartbreak and ending up living miserable forever. but I'm really really glad that that was not the casethat and it was a happy ending

[thursday625]

What can I say, except it makes me so happy that you wrote sekai and did such a lovely job. It was emotionally compelling and i am glad you chose a happy ending. I am half asleep so please forgive my awkward commenting, lol.