Karma's a Bitch but I Have a Bigass Dick Ch. 1/1 KaixRuki

[makochi_kun]

Title: Karma's a Bitch but I Have a Bigass Dick 
Chapter(s): 1/1 
Author makochi_kun
Pairing: KaixRuki
Warning: bad writing, language, sex, crack
Disclaimers: Ofcourse I own the GazettE.......no...no I don't ;A;
Summary “Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrr it’s gonna be another chilly day in Tokyooooooooo~”
Comments This is my first time writing so please don't be mean^^; Also

Comments

[devilonmybed]

I was legit cackling and smiling and then blushing the entire time. The only thing I would complain about is just a few inconsistencies in capitalization and a few misspelled words. But this fic was golden! I really did enjoy this.

The way you wrote the characters I could actually see it in my head. Especially Aoi, like that was spot on. I couldn't stop snickering at his lines. And the diva remarks with Ruki's evil little mind thinking of a punishment seems realistic to me.

Great job!

[makochi_kun]

I'm so happy, thank you!
so many emotions

[rosswen91]

i'm in love with that title :D
this was good, i'm sure as you write you'll develop your style in time!
thanks for sharing!

[makochi_kun]

thank you ;A;
yes i know i ramble lol ill try to plan and such
but thank you for your comment:D

[chimei_tekina]

omg....this was perfection <3 It was so realitic, I swear you must have been hiding somewhere during one of their recording sessions b/c everything was so right. EVERYTHING. Also, I love how you captured Reita's perviness lol I really hope to see more from you ^^

[makochi_kun]

thank you so much:D
what are you talking about i was there;)
kidding
but ill try to make more fics. its more like me having endless scenarios yet too lazy to open up a word doc and type XD
but thank you for such a lovely comment~
sorry for such a late reply too^^;

[chimei_tekina]

you're welcome ^^
and don't worry, I have the same problem haha im very lazy
and no reply is ever late to me, im just happy to get a reply lol