#4

[makoveskus]

The New World

OUR BEAUTIFUL, SELFISH mall. A huge tile floor canvas for teenage boredom to paint its masterpiece. Our mall is like any other mall; and at the same time it’s completely different. A reflection; a mirror-mall really. Thousands of underage feet enter after 3pm and leave before 10pm. Thousands of feet claim their stake in local affairs

Comments

[adhesiveglue]

holla

[makoveskus]

hey hey

[___discoinferno]

Can I ask you if you wrote this?
If it was you, what inspired you to write this?
It's very interesting

[makoveskus]

thanks, yes i wrote this. it's part of a novel that i just finished so it has something to do with what i was talking about i guess, sometime smy mind takes off.

[___discoinferno]

wow that's pretty cool. I admire you for writing something different while your a teenager. I also admire you for having the attention span to write a novel.

[___discoinferno]

also, i mean writing something about the reflection of your own generation. it's awesome.

[fullofpimpjuice]

add me

[makoveskus]

alrighty

[___discoinferno]

nice icon

[howaboutlalala]

burroughs-esque

[makoveskus]

you really think so?

[howaboutlalala]

mhm. you write about taboo subjects + intertwine them with reality-- actual reality. not the classic "movie" kind where the jock picks on the geek.
i really like what you have going here. :)

[makoveskus]

thanks so much, i may post a little more in the near future. i'll let you know if i ever have a few copies printed.

[fightclub_in_nj]

haha thats so sweet

[makoveskus]

thanks broo