The Gentle Violence

[malcairad]

Comments

[caenum]

I wouldn't figure she had dreams about me.

Jeez. Was I that good?

[malcairad]

what didi you think of the story
and i dont know about you being that good just very remeberable.

[sugarfritter]

I always find stories in which the victim actually enjoys the act, odd. You can say it's because of my own experience, because I can assure you I did NOT enjoy it, but there are stories like this out there, and it always just boggles me.
Great writing though.

[malcairad]

writing wise i thought i didnt it pretty well thanx

[xohi_puppyxo]

So have you ever experienced something like that? You described it well enough. Just wondering.

<3 a 15 year old virgin

[malcairad]

nah just came to me from watching porns movies reading about such just did it

[twistedsamara]

Bravo,bravo!I love it..do you normally write stuff like this?I do haha.I want more from you...except the knife kind of scared me a bit.But overall,i loved it.

[malcairad]

the point of the knife was to have the edge of fear to it. :) no i normally dont write stuff like this it was just somethign that came to me!

[ninjette72]

Hey, I'm assuming this is the one you wanted me to read. But now I'm going to read a few of your others. This story was good. Lines I especially liked:
He found her navel with his tongue and licked around and in sucking, kissing, and caressing gently.
She was lost to the pleasure of this forced encounter wanting it to last and yet wondering if she would live through it at all.
His tongue darted in and out of her, adding his wetness to her own.
You really captured the moment here. And by using words like "womanhood" and "flesh" and "member," it doesn't come off as a horrific rape scene. The words you used softens it a bit and makes it bearable. Makes you wonder about your own self and how you would react in a similar situation.

[malcairad]

thank you i was hoping you liked it alot of people said it was good and with your um previeous reading experience i thought youd give me a good opinion! thanx