Original Fiction: Outlands - Sons of the Path, part 3
My sincerest apologies to anyone who was waiting for the next bit of Outlands. Life, as they say, happened. The toddler and the job are both very fun, frantic and fulfilling, and seem to have taken over that vein of creativity that used to drive me to write. I've not touched the word processor since I posted that last chapter, back in - ye gods,
( Read more... )
Comments 26
Awesome, the action is well paced, edge of the seat fingernail chewing good.
Your italics coding is off in the early part of the story and twoards the end Darius is spelled Dairus a couple times.
Other than that WELCOME BACK!
Reply
But seriously, I'm really glad to see more of this--and at the risk of sounding greedy, I hope we see more soon!
Reply
Ryou also suspected that this notion of precise times of departures protected Passers from the hassle of impatient merchants and haughty nobles insisting they leave right now
XD I bet. Liked that explanation, how it's all shrouded in poetic "dawn this" but he can feel that's not the case and it's just common sense that they don't go at night. Bwee for Ryou developing his other sense. *__*
pronounced Periklan solemnly up ahead, a ritual many Passers skipped if they didn't have half-blood royalty traveling with them
*snerk*
Who the hell was pelting them with statues?!
This is halfway between suspicious and ridiculous...
Then the thing moved.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH D:
Darius ignored it as he crouched at Ryou's side.
XD he's so fucking badass. Just hammered a freaky stone creature into the ground and it's still moving, and here he goes, just being cool and unconcerned. Prrrt.
Ryou's steps slowed. He couldn't see anything, or feel anything ominous, but...Maybe he should have let Andrap take the ( ... )
Reply
Reply
Reply
Leave a comment