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Afterwards Chapter - 5

Oct 13, 2006 16:25

Title: Afterwards - Chapter 5

Author: Jhaylin

Rating: PG-13

Pairing: Harry/Draco

Words: 1542

Warnings: Slash (duh!), past mpreg implied, mpreg.

Disclaimer: Not mine. Property of JK Rowling.

Author’s note: It has been a while since I updated, but don't worry, I haven't forgotten. I'm just really slow and a total procrastinator.

Summary: Harry and Draco ( Read more... )

h/d, mpreg

Comments 26

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malfoy_consort October 28 2006, 05:30:21 UTC

Ahaha, I'm actually working at a school right now (job shadowing. I've gotten some time off school to job shadow and gain experience in any field, so I ended up at a school, which was derfinately not what i wanted, but ah well) and some of the kids can just be so annoying. And they talk back! So much attitude. Really frustrating. its like it goes in one ear and out the other. So yes, Harry should take care of his own children and see just how hard it is.:)

campbellslover October 13 2006, 03:33:43 UTC

the jerk...thats all I have to say on that matter. Oh how I love your Draco. and in the words of Mrs. Weasly "Where have you been?!"

malfoy_consort October 28 2006, 05:32:46 UTC

Yah, Harry's a huge jerk. Big change from some of my fave fics, in which he's all doting on Draco, lol.

And yes I know I'm taking really long to update and I'm really sorry, but you know how it is. I've got school, and work, and homework, and other stuff, and its really hard to find time to write. But I'm not quitting. I'll get it done...sooner or later.:)

piratesmile331 October 13 2006, 15:32:39 UTC

I agree with punkimonki that Draco needs to leave the two kids with Harry. It won't take but a couple of days before Harry is begging Draco's forgiveness, and begging Draco to come back.
I hope Harry is going to somehow learn to appreciate Draco and all that he is doing. Right now, Harry is just a selfish bastard. If he really loves Draco (and I'm not sure that I believe that he does), he needs to get himself together and put some effort into repairing their relationship.

malfoy_consort October 28 2006, 05:35:15 UTC

My gosh, it seems that almost everyone who reads this fic thinks that Harry should be left alone with the kids! But it makes sense that everyone wants that. Its a suitable punishment. But I really think that he deserves much worse than just that, because he's being a total jerk in this fic.

Thanks for commenting.:)

The Boy Who Lived To Be A Jerk anonymous October 13 2006, 20:26:54 UTC

Let me see if I've got this straight: Draco wants to wait a while before starting a family, but Harry wants kids *right now*, so Draco becomes pregnant at 20 years of age and has to give up his own, no doubt promising, career. Then two years later Harry wants another kid, so Draco once again reluctantly goes through an exhausting pregnancy. And then Harry gets him up the duff again *a mere 2 months* after giving birth to kid no.2?! And he doesn't understand why Draco is depressed? Will someone castrate the idiot already ( ... )

Re: The Boy Who Lived To Be A Jerk malfoy_consort October 28 2006, 05:42:04 UTC

Oh my. Lol that was very steadfast. And by reading all that, I'll admit that if I were reading this fic, I'd be very frustrated because of everything you've mentioned.

And I think everyone agrees with you that Draco deserves a million times better than what Harry gives. A lot of fics make him giving, but he's like this in my fic becasue it seems to me that if he spent the whole first years of his life (up until 18) giving to everyone and saving them, that after he got rid of Voldie, he'd take the chance to take instead of give becuase that's all he's been doing his whole life. Unfortunately now he's all about taking, with no giving.

I'm so glad you're enjoying the fic. and that last comment really made me pleased because I was worried at first because the fic wasn't very action-packed.:)

puppetslove October 15 2006, 02:19:02 UTC

Well I have to say if I was Draco I would've bashed Harrys head in.
I cant believe how Harry is handling the situation and being such a total inconsiderate B. He did'nt even try to see the kids!
I think something needs to happen to have him wake up and smell the coffee and try to get his Draco and kids back.

btw I totlly LOVE this. I became hooked only after reading the first chap, and cant wait to read what happens next!

malfoy_consort October 28 2006, 05:45:21 UTC

I'm pretty sure that a lot of us would've bashed his head in. Which makes you wonder why Draco didn't. Oh well. you never know. He might.

Harry is being really nasty to Draco right now so yes, he does need a wake up call and he needs to do something to get Draco and the kids back.

Lol, and I'm so glad that you're enjoying the fic. Thanks for commenting.:)