Daysleeper Pt. II Ch. 11

Jan 26, 2008 23:18

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sherron0 January 27 2008, 21:05:36 UTC
I'm enjoying this. I like how you're adding to the vampire "mythology" in the end. Keep going. It's just getting to the mysterious part!

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maliciastarling January 30 2008, 07:08:02 UTC
I hope you like the next chapter too :)

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alanna_smithee January 30 2008, 18:59:11 UTC
I haven’t read your series yet. I just snooped in to read this part and I liked it very much.

“Who are you and what have you done with Henry Fitzroy, Lord of Lechery, Duke of Richmond et cetera? Do you even suck blood anymore?”
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“And playing with your food is a choice too.”
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Henry knew he couldn’t stay faithful to one person, he couldn’t just feed from person to person and discard them without thanking them for the gift of life that they were giving him.
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When it came down to it Vicki was eternally a romantic and a commitment-phobe who believed she should be The One in another’s life.
I love how you portray their relationship here. I see it similarly. The scene where Vicki told Henry in the series, that he didn’t have to play with his food and the one in 5:55 actually irked me a little bit. It’s there in a nutshell why it will never work between them. (That’s why I’m slashing Mike/Henry so avidly *cough ( ... )

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