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LJ Idol - Week 1 - When You Pray, Move Your Feet

Oct 18, 2011 10:53

Anya's Miracle ( Read more... )

when you pray move your feet, season 8, lj idol, week 1, anya's miracle

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n_maranda_coy October 18 2011, 19:57:05 UTC

Very, very nice.

And relatable, too, for me.

malruniel11 October 18 2011, 21:01:00 UTC

I'm glad you liked it, and that you could relate! <3

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malruniel11 October 18 2011, 21:01:47 UTC

Thank you so much! <3

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malruniel11 October 19 2011, 12:01:40 UTC

That would definitely change the ending. It's a beautiful idea, though. I still thank you. ^_^

cacophonesque October 18 2011, 22:18:02 UTC

The language in this was beautiful--simple, clean, unpretentious. Which fit well with the characters themselves. I found that I related to the character of Anya quite a lot, actually. The way that she found deep meaning in the mundane...

malruniel11 October 19 2011, 05:52:03 UTC

Thank you! That was a very thorough compliment! <3

similiesslip October 18 2011, 23:02:48 UTC

I'm amazed at how quickly you wrote such a high quality story! I struggle with my own beliefs but the hearts of ladies like Ms. Anya in your story make me...I can't condemn all who believe, even if I'm not sure I believe the way they do. There are very sweet people who sincerely hold to traditional belief systems.

Thanks for a story with such a note of hope.

malruniel11 October 19 2011, 05:56:00 UTC

Thank you! I'll confess, this wasn't all written this morning, but it fit the topic so perfectly that I finished it up, polished it with my beta, and here is sits. The way some people view the world amazes me. I wish I could always have as much hope and inspiration as my characters.

similiesslip October 26 2011, 00:11:34 UTC

Hey, nothing wrong with making what you have in the works to fit a prompt. I think you made a good choice using this!

malruniel11 October 26 2011, 03:43:32 UTC

I'm glad you think so. People tend to go either way on whether or not it's ok to use something that you started before the prompt was up. Officially, it doesn't matter, though, so I do it sometimes. Thank you!

shadowwolf13 October 18 2011, 23:44:43 UTC

It's those little miracles that so many people fail to see. This is a beautiful reminder to look closer.

malruniel11 October 19 2011, 05:57:45 UTC

The little ones are so easily overlooked because they blend in, but they are dreadfully important and immensely inspiring for me.

shadowwolf13 October 19 2011, 06:02:37 UTC

I couldn't agree with you more. It's the little ones that fill me with wonder and hope for tomorrow.