Comments | maltangi: conversations over coffee (part 1), kangin/leeteuk

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conversations over coffee (part 1), kangin/leeteuk

Oct 09, 2009 23:00

hiii. idk how many of you actually read my stuff here anymore, but i'll post anyway because i had an idea for a series and i miss posting here. ♥

conversations over coffee (part 1) / 757 words.
rating: g
pairing: kangin/leeteuk
( didn't you once say that the world is what you make of it? )

pairing: kangin/leeteuk, member: leeteuk, rating: g, member: kangin, fandom: super junior

Comments 16

dotz_and_piecez October 9 2009, 23:37:49 UTC

This was really nice! I don't know what to say...just, beautiful.

Haha your writing's really good. It brought out a lot of their emotions. XD

kangfany October 10 2009, 09:50:11 UTC

Thank you! ♥

notablender October 10 2009, 01:13:32 UTC

hm. i really enjoyed this. normally first-person perspectives can be hard to deal with, because you don't want to tell too much, but i thought this was really nicely done. i like the introspection, how honest leeteuk is with his thoughts, and the little mundane details like his squeezing kangin's hand.

kangfany October 10 2009, 09:51:02 UTC

I love your comment tbh. ♥
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

ccml October 10 2009, 03:16:20 UTC

I like this. We can never get tired of Kangteuk^^. Looking forward to the next chapter.

kangfany October 10 2009, 09:51:31 UTC

Kangteuk is always good. :3
Thanks for reading!

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kangfany October 10 2009, 09:51:53 UTC

Aw, thank you so much!

prototypic October 10 2009, 10:05:59 UTC

sdjkljf omg you wrooooooooooooooote. tell me how long has it been since you last did that. i missed your writing hsdjkfhksdf. plus a series, homfg.

i like how you incorporated the raccoon story into this, because in a way it's kinda leeteuk to give some random cryptic story and expect kangin to realize what he's trying to say -- except most of the time kangin is a Blockhead.

also, "Didn't you once say that the world is what you make of it?" I questioned, tilting my head a little as I looked at him. He was staring at me and seemed to be thinking closely about what I'd said. A moment later, his fingers were intertwining with mine and I frowned at him but was only greeted with a sad smile. "I'll need you to be able to accomplish that."

yeah you get the whole paragraph quoted because jksdfjsdf last line last line last line.

wriiiite mooooore. i love your writing.

kangfany October 10 2009, 10:21:33 UTC

hasjkahsakj. i love you. ♥

i've been writing! just not oneshots and drabbles and stuff. xD mostly locked away in my fic dumpster never to be seen again, mwahahaha!

prototypic October 10 2009, 11:10:13 UTC

whaaaaaat i want access to your fic dumpster >:(