Entry 6: The Forgotten. Part 1

[mamaliaadvanced]

I stand here, at the front porch of her house on a gloomy day, under the scorching cold of winter in December, with the thick snow covering most of the roadway. The cold stiffens my hair, looking like stack of hay.  I stand here motionless, stolid, frozen, wearing the full arsenal of winter wear- double inner coats, a fur coat, an expensive Mark's

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[raspitutu]

although maraming run-on sentences you've got something good there. nasan yung part 2?

[mamaliaadvanced]

thanks sa comment joyce :) run-on sentences? errr, di ko sila makita. Engrossed siguro ako sa pagsulat nyan. haha

Wala pang 2nd part yan. Yan palang.