Chicago Blues

[mamas_minion]

Dejhan wandered through the house he had shared with his grandmother in a wistful sense of amazement.  He had been surprised to find that not only was it still standing, but she’d left it in his name.  Nana had died while he was going through the Academy as part of his rehabilitation for the armed robbery he’d been busted for.  He had not known

Comments

[messygorgeous]

It's always great when redemption brings you home again!

[mamas_minion]

Thank you, I have been waiting for a chance to write about Dejhan and his home coming.

[rayaso]

More action! I especially enjoyed the nightclub scene and the introduction of a new character. The idea of a nightclub using illusions was very creative.

[mamas_minion]

Thank you, I haven't actually been talking about the magic in this universe so I figured I better start.

[bleodswean]

Great jump out of introspective memory and gratitude straight into action and more action! I liked how you closed this.

[mamas_minion]

Thank you, I wanted to do a little bit more action than what I have been.

[halfshellvenus]

Giselle seems like a lucky break for Dejhan-- a way to get the information he wants, without betraying his friends. It sounds as if most of the remaining gang is a little nuts, and has driven the sane ones away.

It's sad that he didn't get to say goodbye to his grandmother. It sounds as if they meant a great deal to each other.

[mamas_minion]

thank you, His grandmother was very special to him. hopefully Giselle will be a lucky break.

[eternal_ot]

I enjoyed the action here and was so lost in the story that I almost forgot about the prompt till I reached the end. A nice and engaging read :)

[mamas_minion]

Thank you for reading, I am glad that you loved the action in this.