Beating Around the Bush

Apr 10, 2017 18:06

Since recent events revealed Vittorio as a supposed Ndakinnian agent, Chepi was only too happy to transfer custody of their disgruntled travel companion over to command central, certain if he really was working for Intelligence, it had probably been a coon’s age since he’d reported in.  Once they’d relieved themselves of that burden, she and the ( Read more... )

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mamas_minion April 11 2017, 23:51:31 UTC
Thank you!

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i_17bingo April 11 2017, 16:23:36 UTC
You packed a lot of world building and personality into this. I'm going to try to check out more.

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mamas_minion April 11 2017, 23:52:16 UTC
Thank you, I hope you enjoy my other stories.

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rayaso April 11 2017, 22:50:40 UTC
This provided great background, and let us see more of the world you're building. It was nice to have a pause in the action and get some personal history.

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mamas_minion April 11 2017, 23:56:15 UTC
Thank you, I wanted to give a broader view of the world my characters exist in.

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halfshellvenus April 13 2017, 06:23:07 UTC
With that lead-in, I definitely was not expecting Chepi's story to be something like, 'My boring background as an international spy.'

Which, yes, I think might impress even a Special Forces vet.

The province of Minnesota... now, that's some dreaming. :)

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mamas_minion April 14 2017, 22:04:25 UTC
Thank you, Chepi was worried that not having the same experiences as her teammates might make them feel different about her.

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shadowwolf13 April 14 2017, 04:03:55 UTC
So much great detail!

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mamas_minion April 14 2017, 22:05:18 UTC
Thank you, I have been writing in this world for awhile now, but haven't gotten to the wider world yet.

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