You Know That Crane Stance Makes You Look Like An Idiot, Right?

[mamas_minion]

Consider the following fighters throughout history
(just go with me here, I promise this will prove relevant shortly):

• Ninja

• Samurai

• Viking

• Mongol

• Hun
(NOT the same as the Mongol Horde)

• Aztec Warrior

• Zulu Warrior

• Hoplite
(circa ancient Greece)

• Legionary
(circa ancient Rome)

• Persian Immortal
(though

Comments

[tonithegreat]

I love your title! And feel bad for your POV character.

[mamas_minion]

Thank you, Maybe he will get lucky and be reborn as an awesome fighter in the next game.

[adoptedwriter]

Cool! The perspective on this is great! AW

[mamas_minion]

Thank you, I wanted to be different from what I usually do.

[swirlsofblue]

A very amusing piece, love it- and the beginning bit is very clever.

[mamas_minion]

Thank you, I'm glad you found it amusing, I was trying for a humourus bent.

[karmasoup]

I love your stuff, especially the funny pieces, but this is the first work that ever actually made me stop in my tracks, and just laugh until I couldn't breathe... that "Oh, Crap, I forgot what my finisher is!" line just slayed me! Really fantastic shout-out to all the geek gamers out there, and fabulously well done!

[roina_arwen]

I guess if the Squire slayed you, he must have distracted you with his Sense of Irony +3!

[karmasoup]

NICE!

[mamas_minion]

Thank you, I don't tend to think of myself as a humorist, so your comment is deeply appreciated.

[fodschwazzle]

This sings to me. You do underpowered video game characters so much justice through this perspective. I loved it.

[mamas_minion]

Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed this piece